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awesome battle scenes, Drake! nicely done!

Drake, hi, I can't believe I missed this when you posted it!

You've really captured the fight scen so well, from Brins physicality, Wildfire twisting his neck to get Brin, to Mon El's speed and power, its quite incredible what you put into just a few pages.

You've ramped up the tension and I'm really looking forward to whatever you share next!

Great stuff!

This continues being great, Drake! I like Dragonmage's characterisation here where he's a bit shaken and over his head...and that hexagon panel with Imra making mental contact with Mon is really good!

I dig the panel layouts on these last couple of pages generally actually (as well as Wildfire flying in the gutters between the panels on the earlier page)

Oooh I love it! Great scene with XS and Dragonmage, saving innocents and that nice touching bit with their mutual concern, and Xao feeling a bit overwhelmed . And their consternation at not reaching the SP officer in time

And this is the Mon-El I love, having overcome the Phantom Zone trauma and volunteering himself to help save tbe Legionnaires

Also nice reveal re everyone has been converted to Omega Energy

And nice telling bit with the Red Lanterns also descending on Metropolis…

Awesome work Drake!

Thanks! I will say, when this started I had no idea Mon-El would be as important as he's become to this story. But it ended up making sense and I found I had an arc for him.

We're almost at the end of Part II. Part III is going to all be about another Legionnaire (or two) that I also had no idea would end up being so important when this started. I mean, Wildfire and Ultra Boy are like my two favorites, but I took them off the board right away -- what's wrong with me??

Drake, these are so good - reading these is part of what prompted me to get back involved here on LW lasts year! I can't wait to see more of this!

I assume something you're referring to is Vi and Yera? Unless I'm mistaken the last we saw of Vi was her thinking to track Yera down.

These are great Drake.

You are keeping the story going and ramping up the excitement!

Nice characterisations of the various Legionnaires from Dragonmage feeling overwhelmed and Xs empathising, Imra is as pragmatic as always and Mon El is just bloody heroic, of course.

Your art is as clean and clear and just amazing as always, you are super talented! The colours greatly enhance the scenes too, so well done on that as well.

I'm wondering where Nura has got to after her dream about Atmos, so perhaps her and Thom will show up next. But whoever you've got in the wings, I'm looking forward to more, more and more!

Drake, its always a treat when you release these! So good!

Glad to see that Vi still hasn't been assimilated yet and that she's found Yera. I can't wait for the next part!

is that Yera? Has Vi gone to find Yera?

nice twist, having Omega draw from anger and hate...

whoo I love how you weave in and out of scenes, like that one panel with Xao and Jenni still fighting, barely.

Poor Gim, that must hurt...

and nice depiction of the zone or wherever that Lar found himself in! also him looking for Tasmia is a nice touch