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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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wow, i went home this weekend so tahts why i havent been keeping up.
i love what you're doing with db, a troubled boy with a dubious past would make for a self concious bit shy or too serious legionaire.
and the sketch!! maybe when db gets more confident he can come out of the hood and mask.
kid marvel's hot by the way!
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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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i like the team line up too....interesting combo of new characters and powers.
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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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Man. My poor bladder from laughing so hard!! And you're damn right "I" look good. Archane makes me giggle... and Spellbinder has the best one-liner. For sure. ^_^ Can't wait for more!
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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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Originally posted by Caliente: Man. My poor bladder from laughing so hard!! And you're damn right "I" look good.
Archane makes me giggle... and Spellbinder has the best one-liner. For sure. ^_^ Can't wait for more!You do look good! Thanks for reading, Cali, it means a lot that your sticking with this. Originally posted by Disaster Boy: wow, i went home this weekend so tahts why i havent been keeping up.
i love what you're doing with db, a troubled boy with a dubious past would make for a self concious bit shy or too serious legionaire.
and the sketch!! maybe when db gets more confident he can come out of the hood and mask.
kid marvel's hot by the way! Originally posted by Disaster Boy: i like the team line up too....interesting combo of new characters and powers. Thanks, Disaster, I love where I'm going with DB as well. Especially because I only have it partially figured out. Thank you to everyone who is reading and supporting me, it means so much to me.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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write more! write more! im hooked.
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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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I'm trying, but I am also writing one about Arachne (hint hint, go check it out people, feedback is welcomed) and I want to write one about the Starhaven civil war thing, being that people seemed interested in that.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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Chapter Five
The Legion lands on a docking bay on Earth, after confirming with the Science Police, the team learns that the unknown terrorist group is keeping the representative in Warehouse 18. Cobalt Kid launches a plan, Arachne will take the new members through the back way, while he and the rest will attack from the front and hopefully distract the terrorists long enough to have Arachne’s team get the representative out of there.
The frontal assault team charges forward, but they are unable to attack.
Cobalt Kid: There’s some sort of invisible force field around this place.
Spellbinder: Not to mention mental blocks, my telepathy is no good.
Crusader: Suppose we’ll just have to blast it down.
Invisible Brainiac: You guys have that kind of power? I can generate a lot of light, but this force field is pretty solid.
Arachne (over communicator): No need guys, we’ll sneak in and shut down the force field generator from inside.
Spellbinder: Care to tell use how you’re going to do that?
Arachne (over communicator): Moonlight is pretty confident that she can open a hole in the field, she’ll have to close it right after though.
Cobalt Kid: Be careful, Arachne. Loser Lad, do you think that while--
Loser Lad: Have to agree with IB, here, that force field is solid, I could dampen the energy, but I couldn’t break through and we’d waste too much energy trying to crack it, it’s up to them now.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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Legionnaire!
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Gah! Cliffhanger! I need it know what's next.
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Re: Legion of (Message) Super Heroes: Membership Needed (Update: Page 7 on 8/15)
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This is a very very rough cover for 'Membership Needed'...It needs redoing. hope you like it so far though
Remember : It's not technically a suckerpunch if you yell ''DEFEND YOURSELF SPROCKER!'' two seconds before you let him have it.
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Remember : It's not technically a suckerpunch if you yell ''DEFEND YOURSELF SPROCKER!'' two seconds before you let him have it.
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Yeah, I like it, it looks fantastic for a rough cut.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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i love spellbinder's horrified face...
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Originally posted by Disaster Boy: i love spellbinder's horrified face... She probably wasn't expecting three girls with such awesome racks. Oh and thanks for the comments guys, I love to hear from you, it's very encouraging.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Chapter Six
In the back of Warehouse 18, outside the force field, Arachne’s team of Legionnaires puts their plan into motion. Moonlight stands ahead of her teammates. Her gown and hair begins to flow, her hands glow an eldritch green, she touches the force field and opens a hole.
Moonlight: This opening shall be suffice.
Arachne: Alright, let’s get through quickly and quietly.
After the pass through the opening, Moonlight relinquishes her control over the force field and the opening closes. Arachne turns to her team.
Arachne: Hit them high and hit them low.
With that the team separates, Kid Marvel and Moonlight fly to a window, open it and enter, as Arachne turns into a spider and scales the building, when she enters, she returns to her human form and meets Kid Marvel and Moonlight. Down on the ground, Caliente, Frio and Disaster Boy find the back door.
Disaster Boy: It’s locked.
Frio: No problem, this building is made from some cheap alloy.
Frio points to the handle on the door, her hand glows a whitish blue and releases a stream of intense cold, causing the metal to crack. Frio pushes open the door.
Frio: What I tell ya?
But as they enter they are met by the terrorist group.
Frio: Guess I should have thought that metal cracking makes a lot of noise.
Caliente: What, I can’t believe these guys are the terrorist?
Disaster Boy: Does it matter who they are, these creeps have to go.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Chapter Seven
Arachne, Kid Marvel and Moonlight watch as the former Legion Cadets approach their teammates.
Kid Marvel: We should have known that sneaking into a building quietly wouldn’t have been Frio’s strong suit.
Arachne: Well, there’s five of them, and six of us, you help them, I’ll deal with the generator.
Arachne heads off to the generator, while Moonlight and Kid Marvel fly down to their teammates. Kid Marvel steps out, confronting Whitestreak, Blackhole, Spin Cycle, Mist Girl and their leader, Phase Out.
Kid Marvel: What are you guys doing?
Phase Out: Earning ourselves a name. The fools choose you five to join the Legion when we were clearly the better choice. But we Rejects won’t go down without a fight.
Mist Girl: If we’re not going to be Legionnaires, then neither are you.
Frio: You’re going to have to kill me before I go back to being a cadet.
Spin Cycle: Who knew Frio was psychic?
Caliente: Uh-oh.
Phase Out: Destroy them!
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Uh-oh indeed!! Eep. Poor recruits... ...what happens next??? And, yes, someone with a costume as loud as Frio's probably shouldn't be on the stealth team. Kidding, I kid.
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let the bloodshed begin!!!
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Damn DB, you're all about the killing today, aren't ya?
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the future that i'm from is ghetto.
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I thought the future didn't have ghettos... that's what Star Trek always taught me!!
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I find it funny that the people from California are the one talking about the ghetto.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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california's a big place. have you ever been to fresno?
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And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Ha! Oakland man. It's all about Oakland. And parts of Sacramento and parts of LA and parts of SF and... stuff. Fresno's just really flat. Like, really, really flat. Flaaaaaat.
People there have flattitude man. I'm tellin' ya. Flat.
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