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Yay, more DoaL! I agree with everyone else, take your time, it's worth the wait. The only thing I'd wish for would be bigger images...the old eyes, you know.  I love how Brin is the only one thinking of stealth in the cliffhanger. 
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The images actually start out bigger, I sized them down to what I considered more reasonable for the screen. But I will keep that in mind for my next round. And interesting observation about Timberwolf. It makes the next page that much more ironic. (hopefully you'll see soon...) Thanks for the very kind words, folks! I will keep plugging away at this - and yes, between job and family and sleep, there just isn't enough time in the day. (although with football season ending, there will be more on Sundays)
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(1) This is beautiful work.
(2) I am impressed by your skill at visual characterization. You wordlessly tell us who the characters are.
(3) The amount of work, planning and preparation that goes into these panels is inferable, but you make it look easy. It is difficult to believe this is the work of a single person.
(4) Personally, I am jealous.
(5) Keep up the good work.
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Oh, so good Drake! I particularly love the bit with XS rounding up the guns before Kid Quantum can even get around to finishing the second letter in her name! Very cool.
Ooh, four Daxamites! And no Element Lad there to one-shot them by filling the air with lead, so this one will be once more, with feeling!
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wow! Love your Kid Q's leadership, Brin's compassion driving him to action, Mon being alert and saving the guy, and your depiction of XS' speed!
Uh oh, is Violet our next "victim"? Rage, Red Lanterns and Brother Blood.... and four Daxamites!
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Thanks all for the very nice words!
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Those Daxamites look badass! Is the one who hit Mon-El modelled on 5YL Dev-Em? The hair looks familiar. I liked the bit with XS and the guns too, that's pure comics 
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Those Daxamites look badass! Is the one who hit Mon-El modelled on 5YL Dev-Em? The hair looks familiar. I liked the bit with XS and the guns too, that's pure comics Yep! You got the reference.
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And interesting observation about Timberwolf. It makes the next page that much more ironic. LOL...I see what you mean. Ah Brin, your impetuosity has proven me wrong! I like the detail of the panel and color change when Rond was looking through the green-tinted visor. It was a subtle touch that I missed at first read through. More great work!
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More good stuff! Thanks Drake!
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oh wow! Things are heating up... what happened to Brainy...?
Tinya bugging Brainy makes sense, she must indeed be worried about Jo.
Oh no... Imra and Garth... and other Legionnaires not reporting in! Way to keep up the suspense. Who else is down?
Lovely battle with the Daxamites. Like Mon trying to reason with some, like Rond being snippy and Jenni being all upbeat, and Dev being all sarcastic.
Can't wait for more.
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Blorching up a bucketfull of red lantern rings must be hell on on the esophageal lining...
But wow, amazing story, as ever Drake! I'm on the edge of my seat wanting to know what's up with A) Jo, B) Wildfire-not-Wildfire, C) really-real-Wildfire, D) Brainy, E) everyone else!
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