Legion World Forums LEGION OUTPOST Bits o' Legionnaire Business "Death of a Legionnaire" -- LSH fan comic (DrakeB3004)

Sweet lineup, and I love your insignia designs! Gates' is quite creative, and I like the one you're using for Tyroc.

And who do you have between Colossal Boy and Dawnstar? Is it Comet Queen? It doesn't seem to be anyone in your group shot during the induction...

Can I just say I'm tickled pink again at your lineup. Interesting choice having Lu and Chuck still active, with Cos retired.

LOL at Star Boy being introduced as "Dream Girl's boyfriend". Equality! Also her anger at Atmos... or is it? You certianly have me thinking.

That was a shocking - and effective - display of just how far the Red Lanterns' influence has spread! Kudos for not picking a "usual" Legionnaire to die, I think Garth and Gim and Dirk for example have died too many times in too many realities, at least Jo is a new choice. Though I'm also not quite sure he IS dead yet.

And now I'm thinking back to the previous installments. Was Laurel Kent also being affected by the anger of the Red Lanterns?

Woo, thirty-five Legionnaires! Awesome to see a big team, and I love seeing Laurel Kent (in the poncho, no less!) make the big time! Other Reboot characters, like Kid Quantum in the background, and Kinetix, Gates, Dragonmage and Monstress also being members of this otherwise classic-seeming team, is also cool.

You will see who that symbol represents on the next page (whenever I get to post it ;))

Thanks all for the nice words -- without commenting on stuff that's going to happen, there is a bunch of stuff that I've been throwing in here that will be paid off or developed later. (in some cases much later, but I'm working on it ;))

Meant to add, I loved the 'Five Minutes Later' in the style of Five Years Later with the star field pattern.

I read the C logo as Computo, as it appears to have circuit lines in it, though looking forward to finding out who you have planned Drake.

That's very nice of you, but most of those names are movie references and not actual people. Only one of the names there is "real."



Anyone recognize where I might have gotten that star-field pattern from? I didn't create it....

Speaking as a fan of Condo and Andy, it can be worse

But Drake this is AMAZING, I CANNOT WAIT to read more!

This is the "post opening credits" scene...

Computo II! Danielle's is the icon I could not identify!!! Good job, Harbi was right! I'm glad to see Danielle along.

Gosh, one panel away from finding out what happened to Jo!

Love the conversation between Vi and Ayla. It's so couple-y!

This is a good read, and I also like the Vi/Ayla chat...it's fun seeing these guys have normal conversations while they're being superheroes

ooo, Kid Q as mission leader. wonder who else she chose?

interesting costume for Tinya, throwback to the Adventure days

ah, and Jo is still alive, cool!

I loooove the roll call blurbs. Always make me laugh.

Glad Jo isn't dead (probably). As IB said above, Tinya's retro costume is great. Those little computo/Validus creatures are fun too.

Looking forward to finding out where Jo, Nura, Thom and Drake are.

More, more, more

THE PLOT THICKENS!

This is fun, Drake!

gasp!

so that might not be Wildfire at all?

Are Nura and Thom in there too, or have they foreseen this and are working at it from another angle?

This is all taking way too long.... there's still a lot of story to tell. Maybe I'll try a simpler art style or something...
But anyway - happy new year

[edit] Holy Mother-frakkin' shirtballs... I didn't notice I had written "What AM we looking at" until now... duh!

Take your time. It's worth waiting for. Great job!

What Nightcrawler said.

Look, from my perspective, you are doing the work of four people-- writer, penciller, colorist, and whatever you call that guy who fills in the word bubbles.

Plus, I assume that you are working 40 hours a week at a paying job.

A panel every month or two is more than anyone could reasonably expect. (Except you, of course. I know you have this stuck in your head, itching to get out.)

And your work is far more dense than anything in off-the-shelf comics today.

Take your time. I love the styel of artwork.

Alan Scott standing 1000 years behind Rond Vidar was beautiful.

And the "not Red Lanterns" panel is a cliffhanger panel good enough for the ending of any DC or Marvel book-- and better than most!

Completely agree with Nighty and Klar!

also, love your XS. and poor Dragonmage! I wonder if there is a link between his powers and Alan scott, it’s an intriguing thought