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I will have to check this out on a desktop later cuz the text isn't playing well with my phone but this art is great! 
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Wow! Interesting story, with some timely commentary about refugees and racism, and some great Legion action. With a team including heavy hitters like Mon-El, Ultra Boy and Laurel Gand, you still manage to find a way to make Triplicate Girl and Shrinking Violet (and Invisible Jacques) relevant to the combat!
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AWESOME comic, Drake! Your action scenes flow smoothly. Great teamwork too, and you made the "weaker" Legionnaires like Lu and Vi and Jacques relevant despite having the "big three" + Wildfire along. Nice job giving Brin and Blok some lines too, despite not getting any action. Garth contributing leadership and Dawny contributing rescue ops were great touches too.
And top-notch art, of course!
And I really loved the roll call blurbs! Snappy and witty!
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More praise here, that was fun Drake. Nice clean art and a blast of action that is obviously leading to the main story - very good!
My fave line - Dawnstar - it's her sky, you're just a tourist.
As said above, nice to see Lu, Vi and Jacques get their moments, as well as the heavey hitters.
Looking forward to more, more, more!
Legion Worlds Ten - the final chapter is here. Find out the ultimate fate of our fantastic future friends.Only found in the Bits o' Legionnaire Business Forum.
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Thanks! While there will be no "Warden OMAC" series, this really is just the prelude to a much larger story. I have it pretty much written and the next two chapters have been roughed out. Hopefully I'll have time to finish the next installment before long...
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Great work, Drake - and I especially enjoyed the descriptions of each hero. A villain with portal technology is a considerable menace I wonder if anyone else has that tech... Looking forward to future installments and thanks for sharing this!
Holy Cats of Egypt!
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My fave line - Dawnstar - it's her sky, you're just a tourist. Yes! I love that line! As a writer, I even covet that line! It's so good.
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I have to agree with everyone's comments this is a really cool.
You've given a fairly classic team with heavy hitters who get a good work out along with some weaker ones. Triplicate Girl's was my favorite.
I also like all the captions and how witty they are.
Dev-em? that seems like its going to spell some trouble for the Legion. I hope he's here to help as it sounds like the Breach Master isn't the end of this.
Great job!
read the adventures of the Reboot Legion!
http://www.legionworld.net/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic;f=2;t=001232
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Now that I have had a proper look...that was really fun! I really like your take on Shrinking Violet's costume and Brin's appearance, and I like all the identifying captions but "Invisible Kid: ...duh!" made me LOL
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