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Wanderer
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Wanderer
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Future, this is GREAT! And a fabulous punchline too. You really nailed the characters down with this.
Bumper stickers and now this? What more talents have you got to share? Thank you for sharing this, it was great to read about Gates, Kinetix, Kid Quantum, T Wolf's Rimbor crew and Dreamers fears about Thom dying again.
Legion Worlds Ten - the final chapter is here. Find out the ultimate fate of our fantastic future friends.Only found in the Bits o' Legionnaire Business Forum.
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Deputy
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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I fear no more stories from Future!
Good concept, taking one emotion and running through each character. Some funny, some sad, curious, surprising - a real variety. Lyle's acrophobia and Zoe's lack of fear were the least expected - and I agree, great ending! But what's he really frightened of?
Holy Cats of Egypt!
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Unseen, not unheard
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Unseen, not unheard
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Amazing, Future! Very! That was really insightful, especially about Zoe possibly choosing to stay as a Terrorform - you made it make sense!
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The Present is Past
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The Present is Past
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Thanks so much guys. I know to give feedback more often now...it really does do a writer good!
I've always wanted to do a Legion story. This just came to me while going through postboot issues. I started with specific things we'd seen before, Lyle's fear of heights actually from Planet Hell, and just went from there. I never intended to feature every Legionnaire, but after awhile I never could figure who to stop at. So I did them all and shuffled them up.
Glad to see people like it, especially Zoe's bit. It was hard to figure out how to approach her if she really thought like she spoke, but I figured there was more to it than that. With Zoe and power, there always is. That and I got to explain the nose thing, which made me happy for some reason.
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