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It´s the year 3.004 A.D. according to the canon of planet Earth. So far away in the Aries constellation exist a planetary system with a little red sun . Twelve are the planets in it, only four of them have life.
Prayo, the third planet with luxuriant vegetation and populous fauna, without signs of superior life. Legión, the fourth planet, inhabited for ancient colonies of humanoids belongs to distinct galaxy’s worlds.; possessor of two vast continents separated for two immense oceans and divided in 16 little kingdoms, ruling by every one of dominant races and so-called like their origin worlds. In the north and joining the two continents in that area are Winath. To the first continent belongs Titán, Orando, Naltor, Imsk, Cargg, BGZL, Talok IX and in the south also joining both continents are New Kryptón. The other continent are integrated besides for : Shangai II, Xanthu, Mars, Rimbor , Colu ,Zuum y Daxam. The sixth planet so-called Ortinus, inhabited for a highly developed bird race. Finally The tenth world , Herpes, dominating by a matriarchal of carnivorous and lush reptilians.
During many generations , the people of Legión try to find the way of to merge in only a kingdom.
With a wise decision, every son and daughter of the kingdoms joining in marriage. So the whole planet access in a new stage of harmony and prosperity. Even though it seems to a lie, the uniting of the young heirs will be for love.
The first marriage are next to be carried out in the medieval kingdom of Orando. Where the beautiful princess Projectra join your life for always with the handsome prince Val of Shangai II.
To so expecting wedding , all the prince and princess of the another Legión kingdoms will be present It´s a great celebration for the future of your loving planet.
The twins Ayla and Garth of Winath with yours respective couples : the princess Imra of Titán and the prince Brin of Zuum. The sensual princess Nura of Naltor together with your loving, the athletic prince Thom of Xanthu. The shy princess Salu of Imsk joined of the giant prince Gim of Mars. The very sagacious princess Luornu of Cargg, bride of the prince Kal of New Kryptón, who to share your kingdom with your cousin , the princess Kara, falling in love with the prince Querl of Colu. The kindly princess Tinya of BGZL and the brave prince Jo of Rimbor. The mysterious princess Tasmia of the kingdom Talok IX, couple of the powerful prince Lar of Daxam.
Little by little the guest to the real wedding are coming in magnificent carriages drove for the typical beast of every kingdom, to the castle of Orando.
The first in arrive: the prince Garth and the princess Imra, in a carriage drove for four zebrolls, giant steeds, similar to the zebras but with dragon wings and sabretooths. Him in a shining blue and silver costume, she in a sumptuous dress in pink gauze with golden needleworks of the planet Saturn . In the blonde hair of de girl, one fantastic diamonds tiara. Imra is without doubts the closest friend of Proyectra. already that hers respective kingdoms are near. Both princess share the child games and the confidences of the adolescence . With they the princess Ayla dress up with a costume in blue and gold silk like her brother, emphasize her red and shining hair, strokes characteristic of Ranzz dynasty. Next to her the virile prince Brin with worrying red eyes and sharp-pointed ears. Powerful and noble, he was sporting a black and ochre costume who stand out his well-formed muscles. Brin share with Val the hobby for the weapons and all the shapes of combat body to body, besides a close friendship and comradeship.
The disturbing princess Tasmia arrive the thirst with a thought-provoking black dress in very transparent clothes who stick out the beauty of her blue skin and her leafy black hair. The talokians posses like characteristic sharp-pointed ears and deep black eyes like the most darkness night . Her fiancé the prince Lar with pale pink skin , black hair and shining blue eyes, posses also a privileged physical build to base of interminably hours of gym. With two metres of height and impressive body, compose together Tasmia a splendidly couple. Him with the typical colors of his kingdom, red and blue over a spangled space. Both get down of a metallic carriage drove by a feral animal, mix of panther and rhino : the dargho.
In a spectacular carriage drove for four tirrans, a kind of antelope of great size and beauty, arrive : Jo, the handsome prince of Rimbor in company of the no minus beauty princess Tinya. Her with a diaphanous white dress who stick out suitably her woman forms and her black long-haired. Him with a costume in green and red , with the familiar coat of arms, represent by a eagle with open wings and high leather boots.
The princes Kal y Querl, together the princess Luornu y Kara descend of the sky in a giant bird known for the name of grunia, similar a great orange swan with long green feathers over the head and in the tail.
Kal y Kara show off the typical costume blue and red with the yellow coat of armas in the chest. Querl with a sober purple costume and golden boots. Luornu a white, purple and orange dress.

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On top of a giant amphibious reptilian: the gavot who on it back transport a little palace, arrive the prince Gim and his bride the princess Salu, who has navigate for almost two day throughout the large river Trenx. Salu gracefully with a dress in purple and lilac tones. Gim with his war costume in red and blue, with whites helmet, gloves and cape.
The young greet with enjoy and dispose to take their places for the ceremony. However were one real couple missing : the princess Nura and the prince thom. Then a light tremor paralyze the crowd in the real palace of Orando. A hole in the floor near to the palace principal door start to form. First show up a strange thing with drill shape immediately behind an animal similar a mole but with a shielded body like a giant armadillo. When the beast arise of the depths of the earth , in the presence of all extended yours plaques like floodgates, and a rhomboid of pure diamond shining before all.
One side open and a wonderful vision dress in transparent silver cloth make apparition. Was the princess Nura, beauty like no one with her platinum long-haired till the waist, escort for the price Thom, in a costume black and silver.
- You must forgive our delay, friends. Thom and I are discussing a states affairs and the time fly away.
Is not true Thom?- ask her among innocent and sensual.
- It´s true, for this reason we must take a Deoditopus for arrive in time. I hope no wreck your garden,
Projectra.
- This no really matter, only who you two finally arrive. Now the ceremony can begin , all are here.
Come, let the beast with the guardians and pass to the real court. I can´t wait more for turn me in
Val’s wife.
- Don’t you like which after the party , our discuss some state affairs, dear Kal.- ask though-provoking Luornu.
- State affairs? I believe who no have nothing to discuss.- answer amazed Kal.
- You are very ingenuous, my prince. Do you assume what kind of affairs was discussing Nura and Thom before come here?
- Ah... these affairs! I believe I be bewitching to discuss it with you, my love.
- Kara, dear. Your cousin is a little slow for to captivate the finesses. Happen you the same with Querl?- ask sarcastic Luornu.
- To say the true, I believe my answer surprise you. You don’t know how passionate could be a scientist in the love hour.- answer the blonde Kara.- But for the doubts, you wouldn’t dare to try investigate.
- Never I had the idea. I have too much with my superman.- answer Luornu smiling.
Finally all it’s ready for begin the ceremony who joined in marriage to the princess Projectra of Orando and the prince Val of Shangai II. All was joy and happiness in the real courtyard of the castle.
Suddenly the sky start to begin strangely dark. When all looking up discovered with horror the reason for the darkness. A fleet of planet Herpes warships cover the sky disposed to get out.
- By the rings!- exclaim Imra.- It’s herpian ships... How dare as much?
- I don’t know , honey, buy for the doubts cover us.- say Garth.- Maybe attack to us.
- Cursed reptilians! Us make to pay a high price for this outrage. – threaten Gim.
- We must organized soon... Guards, protect the guests!- arrange Projectra. – Val darling, you are the weapon master, go to the arsenal with the boys and looking for something for everyone. We must defend.
- We want to fight too.- say Kara, the most valiant and noble of the princess.
- I’m with Kara.- say Tinya.- I believe all of us. Is not true girls?
- Together for anything! – say the rest of them.
- All right! Go with Val and the another boys.- say Projectra. We fight to the end, for Legión.
All the general joy was make in panic in the presence of the suddenly attack of Herpes. The mother ship land in the center of the real courtyard smashing the altar when the engaged couple was to swear eternal love. A terrific moment for all. The princes and his brides are ready, everyone with a weapon in their hands. The principal mother ship gate opened and slowly with great majesty descend Yorjette, the queen of Herpes. Like all the herpians was extremely tall and thin, her skin cover of black scales shining so many her costume in black too. Her prolong bald head show off a helmet with dark feathers. Yellow eyes with a feral malignity and sharp fangs in a face very menacing.
She move forward to the boys with superiority airs, without to say one word. Projectra like representative of her fathers, who are in safe place, was the first to talk.
- What you want, herpian? And who is this invasion to my kingdom?
- I am queen Yorjette, mammal. And I arrive simply to find male specimens of your race for to perpetuate my specie. Pág. 2
PD. Excuse me me for my english, maybe you can find mistakes, but I believe you can enjoy the story. Later I put more pages from my tale. Thanks.


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Your english is definitely excused! The wealth of ideas here is great. I love the feel of this story, as if set in a medieval tale with princes and kingdoms. Your characters are wonderfully realised too - I particularly like Lu being sarcastic and Thom and Nuras entrance - that girl loves to upstage doesn't she? And we don't really believe they were just 'talking' do we laugh

More more more please!


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A new page of my tale.

- But.. what you say? It’s genetics impossible.- say Querl, the scientist of the group.
- Don’t talk of you don’t know, coluan.- say Yorjette. From immemorial times our race was altered
your reproduction for to obtain the best of another species. In this way we’re here at last to an almost
humanoid state, but in the process we loose the capacity for to breed males. We take the best of the
galaxy for make better our evolution. Here in your planet you got specimen of different worlds,
Winath, Zuum, Daxam, even the doomed planet Kryptón. All of them posses a meta human gen
which no work under the red sun radiation of our system. But our scientists invent a formula for to
to awaken the meta gen mixer with the own and then we will be the dominant race of universe.
- It’s a blasphemy!- cry Tasmia.
- Shut up , foolish talokian.- and look hard her, Yorjette subject her will in a deep hypnosis state. – On your knees in my presence, tiny animal.
- Yes, my lady.- and with the astonishment of all, the arrogant princess Tasmia prostrate herself to the foots of the cruel Herpes queen.
- Look everyone, how easy is for me, dominate you mammals- explain Yorjette with pride.
- This will be over our dead bodies!- cry Ayla.
- All right, if you will... Imperial guard! Take the prisoners and no doubt in kill the females if they resist.- was the sentence of the herpian queen.
From the mothership descend eight herpians, but very different one of the other. Inclusive with variant size and structure.
- These is my personal guard and my best weapon against you, weak mammals. – say Yorjette. – They
are : Titania, Flare, Esper, Caress, Silver Slasher, Alloy, Ghost y Charma. Give to me the princes for
harem and take all the males who you want!
Receiving the order of your sovereign, the mutant reptilian gang attack the real couples. The so-called Alloy are the bigger one of all, covering of grey massive scales which make her almost invulnerable. She rush forward over Kara and Querl.
- I like the little green men.- say drool the reptilian.
- Before you take him, I kill you, awful beast.- sentence Kara raising a big sabre against Alloy.
- Pathetic being... Believe you who your feeble metal weapon can intimidate me? – ask the herpian. – Look like turn it in butter before your eyes. – And with a single hand Alloy take the sabre and smashing with force let it one shapeless metal mass . – Now you’re the next...
- Nooo!- cry Querl interpose him between Kara and Alloy.
- Wise decision , little man. Queen Yorjette will be pleased.- say Alloy.
- Querl! What you say?- ask amazed Kara. – You surrender without fight?
- Kara, I don’t let you sacrifice yourself in vain. Remember as long as life have hope, was to be very fool of my part let me kill for a pride which and more tragic if you lost your life for me. Even though I seem cold and maybe cowardly in this moment, is the more right decision . You will understand ....
Don´t forget who I love you for over all the things. Come on herpian, take me in your sovereign
presence. – and turn your way the prince Querl go to the Yorjette ship, pacifically.
The so-called Flare, thin and with dark brown skin go near to Lar, who try to reanimate your beloved Tasmia, still under Yorjette’s hyptonic spell.
- Wake up, honey... we are under attack.- say him with love, while touch the girl’s blue face.
- No lose your time, daxamite. The talokian to take a long in to recover of my Queen’s hyptonic power.
Are you surreder for your own will or I must force to you?- ask threatening Flare.
- You don’t take me, in the meantime I have force to fight, reptilian!- say the valiant Lar.
- As you wish, stupid.- reply the beast and her scales turn in an red colour like burning lava. The sparklle turn more and more incandescent generanding an ardent shock wave.
The young prince go down under the Flare’s excessive energy. Lar faint and fall.
The herpian take him for the hair and draged him to the mother ship.
Nura and Thom, everyone with a sharped sword waiting for the attack of Charma, the yellow’s scales herpian.


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