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Yeah, this one had a lot of continuity dump in it. When I wrote the original Bat-Fem's origin in "Omnia", I established that E-4's Lou had been engaged to its Dru. At some point while crafting "Covenant", I decided that Lou and Dru (Hey, rhymes! Me rikey!  ) had a son and that he would pop up in the resistance. It didn't occur to me until I was writing tonight's entry that Bat-Fem I was his aunt! I'm glad I didn't overlook that because it gave him an emotional hook and a connection with every member of the Covenant! Naming him "Louis" as an extension of Loser Lad's nickname was something I decided on a long time ago. In our next installment Louis and Adelie will catch up, and we'll fill in some of the blanks in his story!
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^Post 600 to this thread! w00t!
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Legionnaire!
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Dev, is the Daroon like Titan? I think the names Daroon and Xyler 7 are cool. Did you find them or invent them?
And could I use the setting in a little "Future LMB" story? I want to write a romance story.
Go with the good and you'll be like them; go with the evil and you'll be worse than them.- Portuguese Proverb
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So everyone knows...I responded to Emily here in a pm...to give some inside info.
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One word Sharky...briliant.
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sweet... I was just going for mildly amusing...
Just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water...
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I found it humorous...you fairy eater!
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Black Ops: Awesome! Loved the connection, kind of like this other side of Timberwolf has made a brotherly connection with Cobalt Kid, it's a new dynamic for them both.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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The new Black Ops story kicks nass!
Just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water...
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Thanks guys. I love writing those stories.
Sharky...I'll work on the next part to the tag team this weekend...in the meantime, Lon is going to reappear back on LEgion World...that thread will just have finished before his reappearance, the timeline be damned.
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Thanks to Sharky for wrapping the Twovision up. Great working with oyu on it.
Lardy: Love your thread, adn the snippets of what is happening behind enemy lines. Makes me wonder what Dev would have been like in the other universe...and what happened to him.
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Originally posted by Dev Em:
Lardy: Love your thread, adn the snippets of what is happening behind enemy lines. Makes me wonder what Dev would have been like in the other universe...and what happened to him. Well, I dunno. Maybe he's a part of the SMB and imprisoned with the rest in Metropolis? Or maybe he never joined the SMB or even became a villain? 
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Maybe he's an insane villian...who knows.
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Legionnaire!
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It would be cool and appropriate if the current Security Office staff was villains. I was just thinking that with Dev-Em, Red Arrow (she is a descendent of Lex Luthor), and Question Lad you have a good Superman villain team-up powerwise.
Go with the good and you'll be like them; go with the evil and you'll be worse than them.- Portuguese Proverb
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Loved the new addition, Lardy.
I think Kalla loves to put people in their place, is it just me?
BTW, Chapter Eleven of Revealing Shades is up.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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YAY. More reading material for later.
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Originally posted by Dev Em:
YAY. More reading material for later. Yay!!! Chapter 12 is up now. Hopefully I'll be able to finish this soon.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Chapter 13 is up, trying real hard to finish this up. I feel like it's been taking too long.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Nah, Temp---"long" is "Covenant"-long.  
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Lardy knows long...
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Just edited the latest chapter, got some notes with this one.
Lardy, Covenant can be long, because Covenant is awesome.
~cough~ More Black Ops ~cough~
Excuse me.
~cough~Maybe some Black Ops dossier files on LMBPers and the like or maybe some dossier files from Dev as the new Chief ~cough~
Frog in my throat.
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Originally posted by Tempest:
Lardy, Covenant can be long, because Covenant is awesome. Well, of course, it is!  But honestly, it's not the length of the story itself (which is nearing its end--it was always meant as a prequel to the Dark Oval thing that's about to start)--it's the length of time it's taking me to complete it! I mean, look at that first post! "November 3, 2007"?!?! Cripes! It ain't good enough to be serialized for THAT long!!!  Honestly, the problem with that was twofold. One, I got burned out on it because I started it too soon after "Smoke and Mirrors", which itself was on the heels of a string of some other creative endeavors, like Omnia. Two, how to tell a story that spanned such a long time was really stumping me. When I came back to it, I had all this fresh Kalla/Oval roleplay stuff, and it gave me a new perspective. Knowing Covenant was soon going to pay off made it easier to get past that problem. So there's just two or three installments left. <span class="spoiler_containter"><span class="spoiler_wording">Click Here For A Spoiler</span><span class="spoiler_text">It doesn't end with E4's liberation, but it ends in a place of hope.</span></span> I look forward to when these characters will eventually reconnect with the LMB!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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"The Covenant" story-proper is concluded, but there are two epilogues to follow...both hopefully to come tonight!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Originally posted by Exo-Lardy:
"The Covenant" story-proper is concluded, but there are two epilogues to follow...both hopefully to come tonight! Awesome!
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