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Bold Flavors
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Bold Flavors
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Also, Dev, love the latest Black Ops story. Love the continuing fleshing out of the history we've been referencing and I really can't wait to see what you're planning next.
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Originally posted by Chief Lardy: Originally posted by Tempest: [b]New Black Op story was great. I was surprised with Ayva. I was thinking that Hot Chick deflowered Timber Wolf.
Er, actually, they haven't yet shared their "flowers" with each other. Cobalt interrupted them! [/b] Oh! Not an issue, anymore!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Sorceress
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Sorceress
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Originally posted by Cobalt Kid: Re:'Pizazz: Aug-Sept 2004. Remember it like yesterday. Good times I LOVE your memory!!!! And I think I like your definition of a "good time" as well!
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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There's so much to look at in this forum nowadays. Dean's sketching up a storm, Kenaustin ;s cards are "magic" (yweah cheap pun, but whatever ) Tempest has a good story going and Red Arrow enhances her characters some more. Great job all around. STARSEARCHERS! You better be checking that out as well.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Liking the Twovision so far, Dev! Can we expect some chapters by Sharky, soon?
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Originally posted by Dev Em: There's so much to look at in this forum nowadays. Dean's sketching up a storm, Kenaustin ;s cards are "magic" (yweah cheap pun, but whatever ) Tempest has a good story going and Red Arrow enhances her characters some more.
Great job all around.
STARSEARCHERS! You better be checking that out as well.Thank you Dev!
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Sorceress
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Sorceress
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Just read the beginning of the Twovision. Looks great, looking forward to more, can't wait to see what you guys are cooking up.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Thanks guys. Yeah Sharky has some really cool stuff to post. Then we find out allllll kinds of secrets.
...and Lash, I just speak the truth here bro.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Sorceress
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Sorceress
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Dev and Shark, the twovision is looking really good.
Dev not change shape any more?
Porque!?
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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All caught up on Temp's and Dev/Sharky's tales! Enjoying both and awaiting more!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Sorceress
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Sorceress
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Thanks, Lardy!
Posting a chapter is just a second.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Originally posted by Tempest: Dev and Shark, the twovision is looking really good.
Dev not change shape any more?
Porque!? Read the new piece...a little more light is shed on the situation. It turns out that there is a bit more to it than that, it's more complicated than even she thought.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Time Trapper
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Originally posted by Dev Em: There's so much to look at in this forum nowadays. Dean's sketching up a storm, Kenaustin ;s cards are "magic" (yweah cheap pun, but whatever ) Tempest has a good story going and Red Arrow enhances her characters some more.
Great job all around.
STARSEARCHERS! You better be checking that out as well.Hah! Thank you, Dev! I missed this before...
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Legionnaire!
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Legionnaire!
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<span class="spoiler_containter"><span class="spoiler_wording">Click Here For A Spoiler</span><span class="spoiler_text">I like the reveal of two minds in Dev's fanfiction. I love playing with that theme too.</span></span>
With all the memory problems and pocessions, the RP should be very interesting.
I would like to write something with a bit of supernatural flavor since it's the season of Easter. Would anyone be willing to work with me or maybe it would be a good tag team?
Go with the good and you'll be like them; go with the evil and you'll be worse than them.- Portuguese Proverb
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Wanderer
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Thanks for the kind words, folks... it's been a blast working with Dev on this...
Just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water...
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Sharky! That last entry between PBeaver and Ratdad was better than I could have ever imagined...great job.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Interesting, Sharky. PB tells RatDad that they share a "diminutive stature". Is PB really small? I always envisioned her as being more or less human size. I'm also curious as to whether Sharky and PM might have a more human form to morph into like T-Wolf has. I know Sharky's Wiki entry says he had to take more shark formula to save himself, so maybe not him. What about PB? Of course, T-Wolf's "true" form is stated to be his human form in this Twovision. Maybe it all depends on what Sharky and PB's "true" form is? If PB survives this, it would be interesting to see if she and Lardy have some future encounter. I remember entertaining Sharky's idea that maybe it was she who actually shot him. Woulda had a certain symmetry, there! The Bee doing it in the end served the RP better, though, and fit in with the Bee's agenda and motives very well. (Can you tell I'm into this? )
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Glad to see that Lardy.
I will say that for Timberwolf, his base was Dev's DNA...with tinkering. So he is essentially a Were type creature, for lack of a better term.
Sharky will have to answer his part of that one.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Legionnaire!
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Legionnaire!
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I can't wait for Red Arrow to meet some of these evil scientists, given her family heritage and studies (Chemistry Major, minors in Physics and Math). Though I have to quote Einstein in that bad science is less responsible for the evils of the world than bad politics.
Go with the good and you'll be like them; go with the evil and you'll be worse than them.- Portuguese Proverb
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Hey Lardy, lovin "The Covenant"
Can't wait to see how everything ties in.
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Yeah, I've had this waaaaaay on the backburner for nearly three years, now! But this LMB fanfic explosion combined with the impending dark Oval storyline have inspired me to start puttin' out again! It should nicely help to set the stage for the upcoming collaborative novella, I hope! The two scenes I wrote today were ones I've had in mind since I first conceived the idea of "The Covenant"!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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You always find a way. The whole thing has a nice timely feel to it, with the Dark Oval stuff about to hit the fan.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Fabulous and Sparkly!
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Fabulous and Sparkly!
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I'm very much enjoying the "Octopi" tag team thread! It's a real blast! Lardy, I'm so glad to see more of "Covenant". I kinda miss Rockhopper Lass!
The only character in all of literature who has been described as "badnass" while using the phrase "vile miscreant."
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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I've a feeling you two will be reunited before too long, Rocky! BTW, I just edited the chapter with the E4 discovery a little to further explain the Krakatoa reference more accurately. I had to come up with something to distinguish the two Earths and that just leapt to mind. I researched it further and added a couple lines.
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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