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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Long live the Legion!
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Originally posted by lil'rhino: I just read the Princess Pain tryout story Set, and my mind is reeling just like Gigi's!! Your descriptive prose is crisp & concise and you characters are so three-dimensional, they leap up off the computer screen at me!! Simply incredible stuff!! Aw, thanks! That makes my day! I've used Tellus in three different fics now, and kind of described him differently in each of them. He's such a cipher, I can do anything with him!
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Long live the Legion!
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Long live the Legion!
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My much neglected website is updated with the tryouts for Princess Pain and Laser Ape.
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Long live the Legion!
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Long live the Legion!
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Added Shared Dreams (off-screen meeting of Dream Girl, Dreamer and Dream Boy during Lo3W), Family Matters (Blok deals with the League of Super-Assassins during Lo3W), Pictures of People (Element Lad and Mon-El discuss his breakup with Shady) and Light Hearts, Lone Wolves (Tinya and Ayla discuss the off-again, on-again Brin/Ayla romance sometime before the Lightning Saga) to my website. Mostly just housecleaning. New fanfic rattles around in my head, but hasn't yet taken form. Although, Zoe Saugin, the Composite Supergirl, is currently making a fuss that I haven't written her story...
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Wanderer
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Posted a couple more Lian Harper stories, though I'm more curious on what you guys think about the new pictures the artist did.
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Legionnaire!
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Legionnaire!
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Hey everyone, look who got to be the next star of his own shirt!
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Long live the Legion!
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Long live the Legion!
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New fanfic from Fanfic Lady! Check it out.
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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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More Polyanna than Poison Ivy
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More Polyanna than Poison Ivy
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Thank you so much, Set. Sending you a Nura-style virtual kiss.
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Wanderer
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Wanderer
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Hey Dev,
Great start to the Black Ops story! Looking forward to the next part!
S.L.
Just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water...
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Time Trapper
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Thanks. It's gonna jump all over.
Wanted to hit the beginnings, and move around from there. Some stuff will be current, other things will be in the past like that one was.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Sorceress
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Sorceress
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I love the Black Ops!
I am really enjoying where you are steering Timber Wolf's development, Dev.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Wanderer
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Wanderer
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Black Ops rocks!
Tempest's Revealing Shades is a ton a fun to read! Love your use of the Misfits...
Just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water...
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Sorceress
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Originally posted by SharkLad: Black Ops rocks!
Tempest's Revealing Shades is a ton a fun to read! Love your use of the Misfits... Hee...thanks, though I annoyed the hell out of a lot of people here when I was Pizzazz.
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Sorceress
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New Black Op story was great. I was surprised with Ayva. I was thinking that Hot Chick deflowered Timber Wolf.
But what I really loved was that this mission was really covert, made it interesting to read.
Great job, Dev!
And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Thanks. It was supposed to be a little misleading as far as his actual mission.
As far as Hot Chick and he go...there is a reason that he is with her, only part of it is revealed in this story.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Originally posted by Tempest: Originally posted by SharkLad: [b]Black Ops rocks!
Tempest's Revealing Shades is a ton a fun to read! Love your use of the Misfits... Hee...thanks, though I annoyed the hell out of a lot of people here when I was Pizzazz.[/b]That must have been when I was away...because I do not remember that at all.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Originally posted by Tempest: New Black Op story was great. I was surprised with Ayva. I was thinking that Hot Chick deflowered Timber Wolf.
Er, actually, they haven't yet shared their "flowers" with each other. Cobalt interrupted them!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Originally posted by Dev Em:
As far as Hot Chick and he go...there is a reason that he is with her, only part of it is revealed in this story. I didn't see Hot Chick referenced anywhere in the mission. There's a reference to a "she" tipping them off about the King's buy-off, but I assumed that referred to his daughter. Clarification?
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Not referencing her specifically, but something he said about not allowing himself to fall in love with anyone. Thre's a reason why she would be different than the other women he's met. It's part of the bigger picture as to why he would fall in love with somoen like her.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Time Trapper
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Originally posted by Chief Lardy: Originally posted by Tempest: [b]New Black Op story was great. I was surprised with Ayva. I was thinking that Hot Chick deflowered Timber Wolf.
Er, actually, they haven't yet shared their "flowers" with each other. Cobalt interrupted them! [/b]Yeah, they got interupted. Maybe one day.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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Originally posted by Dev Em: Not referencing her specifically, but something he said about not allowing himself to fall in love with anyone. Thre's a reason why she would be different than the other women he's met. It's part of the bigger picture as to why he would fall in love with somoen like her. Ah...yes, I caught that, but I thought you meant something more specific. With Kalla he definitely doesn't have to hide what he does from her. They have much in common.
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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That would be the thing. He finally met someone that he doesn;t have to hide his past from, or the things he does. Now to see if it is strong enough to continue for any length of time...or will her ambitions become too much.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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(BTW, definitely reading and enjoying your Ops Files, Dev. Been checking out and enjoying Tempest's and Arrow's stuff, too.)
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Originally posted by Dev Em: That would be the thing. He finally met someone that he doesn;t have to hide his past from, or the things he does. Now to see if it is strong enough to continue for any length of time...ir will her ambitions become too much. It should be interesting to see if her love for power can leave enough room for him in the equation as time goes on.
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Bold Flavors
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Bold Flavors
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Re:'Pizazz: Aug-Sept 2004. Remember it like yesterday. Good times
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The man is like a machine people.
Active LMB character is still Beast Boy.
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