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It's all done, Cobie-- what's the verdict?

Lash, all I can say is

I love it! I miss your humor in fan fiction! "...and they all ate ice cream"

Well done! More, more, more!

These are all wonderful, but I particularly like "Garden." Brilliant.

Yes, very. I could easily get lost in that gallery.

Thanks all.

Thought I'd knock this thread back on track and say how great it is to re-read the Dannyverse stories again...

Splendid stuff Danny!

Promises:

To read and look at all the stuff I said I would (am currently reading 35C).

To add more to my "Price of Security" story, help Chuck and Vee finish Ms. Grundy, and to help move along the tag story with Invis B and Chuck to a point where more people can jump in!

Of course, I'm tired now, so none of this can happen yet

Cobie I want more of your Onevision - price of security story! I love how you have used a variety of characters - use more, you write great characterisations, I loved your Numf El!

Thanks 'Binger! I'm having a blast writing it! I appreciate the feedback, I'm more proud of this one than the others so far, it's good to know it's being read!

Up next I plan to give Stu some spotlight, and a couple of others. And I'm going to really get the plot moving now that the initial introductions have been made. I'm letting this one take it's time to be told, so that the main characters (Elagabolus and Septimus) gradually grow into characters, and the endings are worthwile.

Thanks B !

To Lash:



Poor Sad Lad!

To Cobie:
Great characterization! You've got our LMBP characters down pat. If I didn't know beter, I would have thought we were all alt IDs of yours

To Abin Quank, Harbinger and Danny:
I love all your stories. They're all different, but they all show great talent.

To Numf:
Loved your segment in the tag-team thread, even though I didn't get the other jokes, I still Hope you come back soon!

To Lash:
What a knack for comedy!

To our artists:
While I prefer reading to art, I still love all of your work. All the different styles out there are still simply stunning. Keep it up!

To the other writers out there:
Love the hilarious contributions to the tag-team threads, and the other fics being posted here. It's great to see that LW is filled with such hidden talent.

Hey IB, you're fairly posting up a storm and your stories are great! It's obvious how much FUN you have with the tagteam. If I could make a wee suggestion that could only improve them - if you used smaller paragraphs or put in space lines betwen them it would be a bit easier on the reader, sometimes the bank of words is a bit intimidating....

I do loves your work IB!

Thanks, Sonnie! I'll remember that.

There seems to be a few more people posting in this forum these days - either groovy stories or fabulous art, it's all good!

Now if only Vee, whoposted my all time favourite single post in the Tag team thread would do a bit more writing for us I'd be a really very happy LMBPer.

Numfie, you are a loony, and we love you!

Yes we do!

To anyone who has just found my last post and is wondering if I'm just being random, for a change I'm not, go read his latest installments in the ongoing tag team thread - Numf is on a quest!



Then repeat after me "We do love you Numf!"

Cheers B.
Must just add a few "Fab"s.

Harbis Ends & Beginnings - FAB.

Cobies Onevision - FAB.

IBs Tag Team threads - FAB.

Abins Eddie Tor + the amazing Trixie - FAB.

Big hugs to everyone.

Hooray for the Matter Eater Lad series!! Issue #3 starting - publisher needed!

XXXs to you, Cramey! So you are enjoying it?

It's funny and it's a great story - although now that they're on Tartarus, I'm thinking it could be Matter Eater Lad: The Movie!

I'm finding it's easier to read the stories in large chunks - so I'll try the Spider Guild next.

Just read two pages of the LMBP tag-team, that's bopping along nicely - but the number of characters gets confusing - I read the story but wouldn't know where to take it next. By the end of the page, I forget who's where, who's attacking who - and now you've split Cobie into three parts!!! My head hurts! (just kidding) Numf-el in Panama - great cliff-hanger he's left us. Squeak of anticipation indeed!

I'm loving Numf's posts in the tag thread! Kaant is my new favorite character!

But I have to agree that it's getting really confusing now . With Cobalt all over the place, Stu's idea of three Cobie's just seemed so funny . I'm thinking of starting a new tag thread to try and get others to join in on the fun.

I'm loving Lash's Spider Guild story right now! Great stuff, I crave more O Great Lash! And the Matter-Eater series is great so far too, I hope the two writers don't mind when I send in letters

I'm also reading Harbi's Glorion Grundy and the Mindbender story, but making sure I don't rush it. I love the world Belinda has created! Between reading all these stories and writing two of my own, not to mention daily life , one can only read so much!

Great stuff all around!

Hey Cobie, you can send all the fanmail to M-E Lad you want! That has been a total pleasure (since we got back on track with it) and EDE is a fantastic collaborator!


As for SPIDER GUILD, it's actually become bigger than I originally intended so I've slowed down with it somewhat... actually, the nice responses it got prompted it to start becoming bigger than I planned... I want to stick somewhat close to the original end I had for it... and pray it doesn't disappoint! So more is coming soon.

I've really enjoyed the creative outlet the BITS forum has become for me.

I promise more of my "Security Onevision" when I get the chance! I still have to get to the major meeting of Legion Worlders to decide the next course of action. And the subsequent decision that alters the course of the story...

Everyone else: keep writing as much as possible! And that goes for the artists as well, keep the pics coming !

Oh, and I wanted to publicly note that I will get back on track reading everyone's stories once SPIDER GUILD is finished...

Numf, I'm loving your arc in the Ongoing Tag Thread right now! Kaant is one of the funniest characters I've ever read!

I haven't been posting in the Ongoing thread myself for a little bit (I notice Chuck and IB haven't either). I think a lot has to do with there only really being four of us posting there now for over ten pages, and we're all kind of off doing our own thing. Plus, the massive page count makes it so that people don't really want to join in it seems, since everyone isn't up for reading the previous thirty pages to catch up.

In other words, it seems that the Ongoing Tag Thread has slowed down considerably, and I've been considering de-highlighting it for a time. However, I'm not saying that we'll stop posting in it, after all, it is an ONGOING, and besides, the best written and funniest stuff I've read has been in it. But it has slowly but surely become a thread written by Numf, Chuck, IB and I, and I don't even know if anyone else checks it out.

So someone give me some feed back on this! I'm curious! Should I de-highlight it? Does anyone else read it? Is anyone else ever going to start posting in it?

Side note to Numf, Chuck and IB- Guys, I love reading your stories, so please keep them coming. You keep posting, I'll keep reading them, and when I get inspired, I'll make sure to throw my own posts in too! With my Security story taking up a bit of my creative free time, I just don't have it in me to create and run my own adventures in the Ongoing right now. But I want to keep reading yours! I do have it in me of course, to throw quick posts into tag threads and mess them up .