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What can I say, I'm a follower... so now it's "Not Quite All Star Green Lantern" since I'm not even a Small star...

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GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 1

Full page star-field. Center of the page, in "glowing" green letter (in a
sort of "Star Wars" crawl:

"FOR OVER 3 BILLION YEARS THE GUARDIANS OF THE UNIVERSE HAVE KEPT PEACE IN
THE GALAXY WITH THEIR GREEN LANTERN CORPS. CONSISTING OF 3600 BEINGS FROM
ACROSS THE UNIVERSE, EACH MEMBER OF THE CORPS MUST BE FEARLESS AND HONEST,
WITH AN UNSHAKEABLE WILL POWER. EACH MEMBER IS GIVEN A RING OF POWER CAPABLE
OF DOING ANYTHING THE BEARER DESIRES."

"FOR OVER 25 YEARS GREEN LANTERN ABIN SUR HAS KEPT SECTOR 2814 SAFE FROM
ALIEN HOSTILITY, BUT THAT IS ABOUT TO CHANGE. AN ALIEN VIRUS, KNOWN ONLY AS
LEGION, HAS BEEN UNLEASHED IN THE GALAXY, ONE THAT THREATENS TO DESTROY THE
CORPS AND BRING INVASION FROM BEYOND..."

At the bottom of the page, a small star fighter being pursued by two small
yellow specks (small yet distinguishable as not stars).

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 2

-PROLOGUE-

1 - Close up of the starship from page one, different angle showing hull
damage & trailing smoke. Yellow laser beam approaching ship.

2 - Abin Sur sitting in captains chair, hands on the flight controls. His
left arm is bloodied, and his tunic is stained with blood from being shot in
the back multiple times. Loud explosion behind him.
Caption: (ital.) "Aft stabilizer has been hit. Navi-computer's down, I must
leap blindly into hyper-space..."

3 - Close up on Abin (chest & up) looking very angry & determined. Blood
trickling down his face...
Caption: (ital.) "I will not let LEGION have this ring... not with so many
of us falling.

4 - Silhouette: A large yellow projectile pierces the back of his chair and
through Abin.
Abin: AAARGH

5 - Abin reaches for the hyper-space activator.
Caption: (ital.) "Better to die... destroying the ring... than to let... HIM
have it."

6 - Star-ship leaps into space with two yellow silhouetted figures watching.
One, a tall, thin male, the other a short young female.

7 - Black blood shot eyes (the blood is yellow) on a pink face narrowing
with anger.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 3

Title: "GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps"
Chapter 1: Emerald Dawn

1 - Distance shot of air hangers, control tower & landing strip with several
planes on the tarmac.
Caption: EDWARDS AIR FORCE BASE FLIGHT TEST CENTER, CALIFORNIA.

2 - Locker room, a tall muscularly built man standing in front of locker
mirror zipping up flight suit, reflection of the name "Jordan" in the
mirror. The man has very short, close cropped brown hair.
Guy Gardner (off panel): "Hey, Lt. Jordan..."

3 - Guy Gardner leans against the locker next to Lt. Hal Jordan's. Guy is
slightly shorter than Hal with a bright orange buzz cut & blue eyes. Guy has
a very muscular build, making him look very stocky.
Guy: "Looks like it's just you & me up there today... for old time's sake.
But, since this is our last hurrah before your discharge... I'm kickin' your
ass. "

4 - Hal with a sarcastic smirk on his face.
Hal - "Like you have oh so many times before, Guy? Get out of my face before
I remove you myself."

5 - Guy angrily jabs a finger into Hal's chest.
Guy: "Like hell you sonova..."
John Stewart (off panel): "Boy's, I suggest you save it for the field"

6 - A middle-aged black man in dress fatigues with a captain's insignia on
his lapel stands, hands clasped behind his back.
Guy & Hal (both off panel): "Captain Stewart sir!"
Captain John Stewart: "At ease. I do not need to tell the two of you that
General Scott from the joint chiefs is here to watch you two hotshots with
the X-23's."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 4

1 - Both men standing more relaxed staring at Capt. Stewart.
Hal & Guy together: "No Captain Stewart"
John (off panel): "Good, Lt. Gardner, you're dismissed. Lt. Jordan come with
me.

2 -Silhouetted by the light between the hanger doors Jordan & Stewart walk
together through the hanger towards the tarmac.
John: "It's a shame to see you go Lt. You sure you won't change your mind?"
Hal: "No sir, it's time & Ferris is making me an offer I can't refuse. I get
a few weeks off to visit my family then it's off to fly the experimental
planes."
John: "Well, you do get to do that here..."
Hal: "Yes sir, but no offense, the pay at Ferris is a lot better."

3 - John & Hal shaking hands just outside the hanger. Two small, jet
fighters sit side by side in the background, Guy Gardner , climbing up the
cockpit ladder of one.
John: "Off to follow in your father's footsteps... It's a shame that we're
losing you Lt. Jordan. Marty would be proud."
Hal: "Thank you Captain, but you still have me for two weeks... and I will
keep in touch."

4 - Hal climbs into his planes cockpit.

5 - Hal straps on his helmet & oxygen mask. Through the radio:
Guy (burst): "Hey Jordan no hard feeling's, huh?"

6 - Hal turns his head to see Guy flipping him off .

7 - The control tower, Capt. Stewart, stands side by side with General Alan
Scott (an older man with graying blonde hair).
Alan: "OK, Captain, let's see what these babies can do..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 5

1 - a shot of the planet Earth with the moon in the foreground.

2 - Abin Sur's star-ship exits from hyper-space.

3 - the ship begins to enter the Earth's atmosphere, and begins to break up.

4 - The two X-23 planes dogfight over a barren desert landscape, devoid of
any life.
Caption: ABOVE DEATH VALLEY, CALIFORNIA

5 - Small inset frame on the bottom left - Guy Gardner in his flight helmet
("Gardner" above the shaded lens) a warning claxon ringing in the cockpit.
Guy: "You suck Jordan"

6 - Small inset frame on the bottom right - Hal, cocking his head to one
side ("Jordan" above the shaded lens)
Hal: "Keep talking hot-shot, if it makes you feel better... Taking you down
has become second nature."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 6

1 - Shot from above looking down toward the west coast of Northern America.
Abin Sur's ship reduced to not much more than a fiery blur, as it's wings
are torn from the fuselage.

2 - Shot from above as Guy in his X-23 tries desperately to evade Hal's
fighter.
Guy (thought balloon from lead plane): "Damn, bastard is the bravest SOB
I've ever met... well if I can't outfly him, at least I can piss 'em off..."

3 - view up from control panel on Hal, both hands on the stick, one in
firing position.
Guy (burst): "I'm glad you're leaving, glory hog. I know the real reason
though, trying to get in there to hook up with the little boss lady, eh?
Little Carol Ferris... been there, done that."

4 - Control room, Captain Stewart holds his head in his hand as General
Scott stands there smiling.
Hal (burst): "You're getting desperate to throw me off you tail aren't you
Guy? You're just jealous that I get to fly all the pretty new birds at
Ferris."

Control operator - "Sir, we're picking up an incoming object heading this
way, fast. Could be a small meteor, but it's headed right for the testing
ground."

5 - Guy sits in the cockpit shaking with fury as the claxon bell goes off
one final time.
Hal (burst): "...aaand, Ladies & gentlemen, that's a lock. Guy, I may not
be the best that has ever flown, but, at least I can always prove I'm better
than you."
John (burst): "Jordan, Gardner GET OUT OF THERE NOW, you have incoming...
Copy? GROUND THOSE BIRDS ASAP!!!"

6 - Hal flips off his oxygen mask & looks up, a yellow glow from the
fireball reflecting on his helmet.
Hal (whispering): What the He...

7 - Guy looking up, opposite side, yellow glow from the fireball also
reflecting on his helmet
Guy (whispering): "ll is that?"

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 7

Full page shot on the remnants of Abin Sur's ship slamming into the desert
landscape causing a massive explosion & shock-wave.

Sound Effect: THOOM!!!

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 8

1 - half page long panel view of both fighters trying to out-race a giant
shock-wave of dust & rock.
Guy (burst): "MAYDAY! MAYDAY!"

2 - Hal, gritting his teeth & trying to reattach his oxygen mask...
Hal (shouting): "GUY, IT'S NO GOOD, THEY KNOW WE'RE IN TROUBLE... EJECT."

3 - View of Guys X-23 plane through Hal's Cockpit as Guy ejects. Warning
claxon's ringing.
Hal: "Dammit... can't outrun it... I'm losing her... Control this is
Jordan, I'm ejecting too."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 9

1 - side view of Hal's X-23 as the canopy blows back & he ejects. His plane
is too low to the ground.

2 - Hal's plane slams into the desert floor.

3 - Hal hits the ground hard, with a snap, both of his legs break.

4 - Hal lies on the ground in a very unnatural way, being covered with dirt
& rock.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 10

1 - From the smoke filled crater in the desert, a green glow emerges.

2 - close-up on the green glow shows that it is Abin Sur's power ring.
Ring: "Searching..."
Ring: "Scan complete... possible 3 targets found within a 100 bream radius"
Unseen ethereal voice: "Find the closest, we haven't much time..."
Ring: "Acknowledged"

3 - In a green flash the ring flies over the massive debris field, littered
with rock, and metal fragments from Abin's ship.

4 - The ring approaches one of the destroyed planes.
Ring: "Target acquired..."

5 - The ring flies low and slips onto the finger of the broken Hal Jordan
(only his hand exposed through the dust & dirt)
Unseen ethereal voice: "Oh, we do have our work cut out for us with this
one."

6 - Hal's unconscious body is uncovered and lifted into the air by a bright
green glow.

7 - Hal's legs both snap back into place as the ring of power heals his
injuries.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 11

1 - Hal suddenly awakens. Coughing up the dust from inside his lungs.
Insert coughing & hacking sound effects.

2 - Hal glances down shocked to see that his flight suit has been replaced
by a suit of green & black with an odd glowing symbol on his chest.
Hal: "what the hell...?"

3 - Hal looks down at his black gloved hands and sees the glowing green ring
on the middle finger of his right hand.
Hal: "what the hell is going on?"

4 - Full shot of Hal in his uniform, arms spread out to his sides, looking
down at the uniform he wore.
Hal: "Alright, if I'm dead, this is definitely not what I thought it would
be like."

Unseen ethereal voice: "Hello Harold Jordan... Congratulations, you have
been chosen by the ring of power to become the Green Lantern of sector
2814."

Hal: "what the Hell is going on... now I'm hearing things."

5 - The ghostly image of Abin Sur emanates from the face of the power ring,
and appears standing next to Hal.
Abin's ghost: "There, is this better?"

Hal: "JEEZUS..., who are... what are you?

Abin: "I am, or was, actually, Abin Sur, Green Lantern of this sector, and
you've been chosen to succeed me."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 12

Chapter 2: A Brief History Lesson

1 - Hal stands shocked, gasping at the ghostly image of Abin Sur staring at
him.
Hal: "What do you mean succeed you? What the Hell's a Green lantern? Are you
a ghost?"

Abin: "I am not a ghost, but I am dead... you see me now as my ring did. We
will answer more of your questions soon, but we must hurry, HE may have
followed, we need to get you to OA..."

2 - Hal, clearly aiming to put his hand on Abin's chest, puts it right
through it instead. Abin's spirit stares down at Hal's arm.
Hal: "Gaah!! Listen spooky, I'm not going anywhere without a few answers."

Abin: "Alright then..."

3 - The air around Hal begins to change and, as if in a dream Hal's
surroundings change.

4 - Hal finds himself standing on what seems like another planet, surrounded
by many beings, all in the same uniform. Buildings all around him colored
yellow.

5 - Hal glances over his shoulder and is astonished by what he sees.
Hal: "Gasp!"

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 13

Full page shot of Hal & Abin standing side by side before an enormous Green
Lantern (the Central Power Battery of OA) Energy pulsating from it's center.

Hal: "My God..."

Abin: The Green Lantern Corps were formed 3 billion years ago by our
masters the Guardians of the Universe. They created the GLC to preserve
peace and order across the universe. There were 3600 of us, each carrying a
ring of power like the one you wear. The ring is the most powerful tool in
the universe, it is powered by your willpower and is capable of doing
anything you can imagine... it will protect you from mortal injury, and it
can help heal minor injuries...

Hal: "Hang on... if it can protect you from "mortal injuries", why are you
dead...?"

Abin: "Listen carefully to what I say... The ring has two weaknesses, first,
in order to work the ring must be recharged every 24 hours by it's Lantern
battery, a small version of what you see before you now. It and the ring are
linked together to this main power battery on OA. Secondly & most
important...

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 14

1 - Close-up on Abin's face, a very stern look on it.

Abin: "Due to a necessary impurity, the ring is powerless against anything
colored yellow. It was not the crash that killed me, I was dead before due
to injuries I sustained against a madman wielding a yellow power ring like
yours. Which leads us to the most serious problem...

2 - The image of OA begins to fade, full shot of both standing once again in
Death Valley, heavy dust in the air.

Abin: "A virus known only as LEGION has been unleashed in our Universe. We
do not know exactly where it originated, although the Guardians do have a
few ideas."

3 - focus on the astral image of Abin Sur's ring.

Abin: "The virus attacks the power ring directly, turning it yellow and then
spreads through the ring barer like a parasite.

4 - Shot of Hal staring down at his own ring. A look of disbelief still on
his face.

Abin (off panel): "the virus corrupts the mind quickly, sending the barer on
a single minded mission to spread the virus to other GL's. The first of us
to fall was GL of sector 1417, named Sinestro.

5 - Abin's image changes into an image of Sinestro a tall, thin, yet fit,
alien with pointed ears & a goatee.

Abin (as Sinestro): "Sinestro was always, in my opinion, over-zealous. But
the Guardians liked his results.

Hal (off panel): "So, if the ring is turned yellow, and our rings have no
power over anything yellow, how do you stop the virus?"

6 - Abin (returning to form) with his pointer finger in the air view from
over Hal's shoulder.

Abin: "Ah, that is the question... and why so many of us have fallen
already."

Hal: "How many?"

Abin: "At last count, close to 1000..

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 15

1 - small panel, Abin looking over his shoulder into the desert.

Abin: "Someone approaches...

2 - Shot of desert landscape from the view of, say, a lizard. Of Hal (back
turned to the panel) & Abin looking intently at him. In the distance through
the dust, the shadow of someone approaching. A small glowing lantern hovers
in the air beside Abin.

Abin: "Listen carefully, when you need to recharge your ring, simply will it
to appear. When it appears, place your ring to the face of the Lantern and
recite the oath..."

3 - Close up on Hal's face, green glow shining on it.
Sound effect coming from the direction he's looking in...

Hal: "Wait, what oath??? Abin, WHAT OATH!!!???

Guy (off panel): "Jordan?"

4 - Shot similar to panel one (from the lizards perspective). Guy stepping
through the cloud of dust, severe gash on his right cheek, his flight suit
torn in a few spots. Hal is back in his tattered & torn & blood stained
flight suit.

Guy: "Who the Hell are you talking to? You hit your head harder than me?"

Hal: "Apparently so..."
Hal (thought balloon): "Was I hallucinating the whole thing?"

Guy: "You hallucinatin' or somethin'?"

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 16

1 - Hal staring down at his ringless right hand.

Hal: "Yeah, or something..."

2 - Guy pointing (with his thumb) over his shoulder towards Hal's downed
plane.

Guy: "When I found that, thought for sure you were worm food"

3 - Hal glaring at Guy fist clenched...

Hal: "Thanks for the concern, ass..."

Guy (off panel): "I just call it as I see it Jordan"

4 - Both men standing before the smoldering wreckage of the plane 100 yards
away from where they were standing (Hal's parachute blowing in the
distance).

Guy: "How the hell did you walk away from that? You landed less than 100
yards away from the crash."

Hal: "Luck, I guess..."

Guy: "Great... the almighty Hal Jordan survives an UN-survivable crash."

Hal: "Sorry to disappoint you."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 17

1 - Sound of helicopters in the background, Guy walks towards the sound.

2 - Hal takes the opportunity to look again at his ring-less hand.

Hal (thought balloon): "OK, willpower, will the ring to appear"

3 - Close up of Hal's hand again and the ring is there.

Hal (thought balloon): "Holy crap... it worked. I wasn't hallucinating...
ring gone."

4 - Full body shot of Hal staring up into the sky ground view looking up.

Hal (thought balloon): "Amazing, what do I do now...?"

5 - Same shot, Hal shielding his eyes from the flying dust as a rescue
Helicopter hovers above him.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 18

1 - Captain Stewart jumping out of the landed helicopter running towards Hal
& Guy.

John (burst): "Jordan, Gardner!!!"

2 - Guy leaning into Hal, hand next to his mouth as if sharing a secret with
Hal.

Guy: "Great, now it hits the fan..."

Hal: "It wasn't our fault Guy, he knows that."

Guy: "For you maybe... Stewart's Golden boy... I'm screwed."

Hal: "I can only hope..."

3 - John standing in front of both men, sweat on his brow, General Scott,
approaching from behind.

John: "I'm glad to see you both made it out alive."

4 - Shot of General Alan Scott, very angry, his hand on Captain Stewart's
shoulder.

Alan: "I want both of you on the evac. copter now! both of you are to report
for complete physicals & then to debriefing. I want a full report of
everything."

5 - Shot of Guy & Hal being helped into the helicopter over the shoulders of
the General & Captain.

John: "Alan, it wasn't their fault..."

Alan: "I know that CAPTAIN, but I am going to have to explain to the "Joint
Chiefs" exactly what happened to their brand new 2 million dollar stealth
fighters."

John: "Understood General."

Alan: "Now, let's see the crash site, I understand that the haz-mat team is
there now."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 19

Full page shot from the air looking down on the crater caused by the crash,
Hal & Guy both looking out the helicopter door. Ground zero is an enormous
crater with rock & debris littering the ground for miles in every direction.
Pockets of smoke coming from the ground in several spots.

Hal (whispering): "my God..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 20

1 - A jeep drives up to ground zero. Everyone in the jeep wear haz-mat
suits.

Caption: later...

2 - John & Alan in haz-mat suits approach the haz-mat team on site. The team
stands kneeling on the ground looking at something on the ground...

Haz-mat member: "General, Sir, we've found something..."

3 - Alan & John rush over to the spot the others are standing.

4 - A piece of metal lies on the ground in front of the kneeling crew, it is
a fragment of metal burnt around the edges, but in the center, the GL
symbol.

5 - Close up shot of General Scott a look of horror on his face.

6 - Shot of the whole group of men, Alan staggering back & John catching
him.

John (burst): "MEDIC! I NEED A MEDIC!!!"

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 21

1 - Shot of Edwards Air force base hospital.
Caption: 24 hours later.

2 - Hal Jordan exiting the hospital cell phone in hand, an MP walking beside
him. Guy Gardner walking 10 paces behind with an MP also.

Hal: "Don't worry Mom, I'm fine, they just kept me over night for
observation, I'm headed for debriefing now.

Hal: "No Mom... I'll call you when I'm out. No, tell Jack I'm fine."

Guy (thought balloon): "Mama's boy"

3 - General Scott's office, Alan rests with his head in his hands a tear
down his cheek, pictures of the alien symbol on his desk.

Caption (ital.): "How could I have forgotten everything? It's been almost 37
years, but how could I have forgotten the horrors of that night...?

Intercom (burst): "General Scott, sir, Jordan and Gardner are being escorted
to debriefing now..."

4 - Alan standing up, straightening his uniform.

Alan: "Thank you Nancy, I'm on my way..."

5 - close angles shot of the photo on his desk, blurry silhouette of Alan
exiting the room.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 1 page 22

EPILOGUE

1 - The surface of the moon with the Earth in the background. A yellow glow
coming from the top right of the panel.

Pink Caption box (ital.): "So Abin, your trail ends here on this little
mud-ball..."

2 - Sinestro standing, his back turned to the viewer, he is in silhouette.

Caption (ital.): "Your ring must be out of energy, I cannot pin-point you...
Caption (ital.): "No matter, I'll wait...

3 - Half page shot of Sinestro, right hand clenched into a fist, glowing
yellow power ring on his middle finger. Evil smirk on his face.

Caption (ital.): "You'll have to recharge eventually..."
Caption (ital.): "Then, you'll be mine."

TO BE CONTINUED...

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 1

1 - Shot of the street outside General Scott's office, Hal & Guy exiting.

Caption: Edwards Air Force Base, 12 hours later...

2 - Guy and Hal (looking incredibly tired & wearing civilian clothes)
glaring at each other, not saying a word.

3 - Both men turning & walking in opposite directions.

4 - Hal, hands in his pocket walking down the street.

Caption (ital): well, that was interesting... Never faced the wrath of a
General before.
Caption (ital): ...and I'd rather not try it again.

5 - Hal looking down at his bare right hand, looking for a clue as to where
the ring went.

Caption (ital): OK, ring... where'd you go?

6 - Close up on Hal's right hand as the ring materialized

Hal: "Oh... crap..."

7 - Hal running down the street towards base housing with his right hand
shoved in his pocket.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 2

Title: "GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps"
Chapter 3: The Great Experiment

1 - Full page of Hal inside his house with his back against the shut door
looking out of breath, staring at the ring on his finger.

Caption (ital): Well, the was stupid. I ran all the way here so no one would
see the GL uniform... and it never appeared. Just looked like I was playing
with myself while jogging. Perfect end to the longest day of my life...

Caption (ital): Thing must be out of juice... Abin said something about
recharging it every 24 hours & I've had it for about 36...

Hal: "What the hell..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 3

1 - Hal (back/side view to the reader) standing in the middle of his living
room holding his right fist out.

Hal: "Said something about an oath..."

2 - Same shot, civilian clothes replaced with GL uniform, empty space in
front of him now occupied with the glowing power battery.

Caption (ital): This is so amazing... something's pulling me forward...

3 - Hal is pulled quickly closer to the battery, the ring on his right hand
glowing & attached to the face of the lantern.

Caption (ital): I'm hearing a voice inside my head...great now I'm hearing
voices.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 4

1 - Guy Gardner walking towards his house, smoking a cigar wearing
camouflage pants, his favorite "Green Bay" T-shirt and his bomber jacket.
Whistling the Packers fight song.

2 - odd green light coming out of the window of Hal's house catches Guy's
attention.

Guy: "Whu...?

3 - Guy sneaking off in the direction of Hal's place to look in the window.

4 - Hal, surrounded by green electricity, shielding his eyes with his left
hand as the ringed right gets a charge from the battery.

Hal (ital. in wavy balloon): "In brightest day, in blackest night, no evil
shall escape my sight. Let those who worship evil's might, beware my
power... Green lanterns light."


5 - (small frame in bottom right corner of 4th frame) - Guy open mouthed,
cigar falling, staring through the window.

Guy (whisper): "what the @#$!..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 5

1 - Hal standing in the middle of the room, staring down at his GL uniform.

Caption (ital): "what a rush."

2 - close-up of glowing ring.

Hal: "Well, you can do anything, huh? OK, bring me a beer"

3 - a beam of light shoots out of the ring and heads directly to the
kitchen.

4 - beam of light forms a hand reaching for the refrigerator door.

5 - look of astonishment on Hal's face as he stares down at the beam of
light coming from his ring.

6 - same shot as before, but the glowing hand (holding an opened can of
beer) connects with the ring face.

Hal: "This is too cool..."

7 - Willing his ring & uniform gone, replacing them with his civvies while
reaching for his coat.

Caption (ital): "I need to try something bigger than this... but I can't
risk being seen. I know just the place."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 6

1 - Hal hopping in his old beat up jeep, Guy watching from behind a bush.

2 - Guy running for his "pimped out" El Camino with Wisconsin plates that
say "GUYSRYD"

Caption: "I knew it, freak is in league with aliens or the Taliban or
somethin'. He had somethin' to do with the crash...'m not lettin' you outta
my sight Jordan."

3 - Guy inside his car reaching for his glove compartment.

Caption: "I'm takin' you down or bringin' you in freak."

4 - Close-up on pistol.

Caption: "One way or another"

5 - Hal's jeep heading towards the base gates, with Gardner's car following
in the distance.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 7

1 - wide shot of a dry lake bed, dusk. Hal's jeep coming to a stop, no one
around for miles.

Caption: El Mirage, dry lake bed.

2 - Hal exiting the jeep.

3 - Guy parking his El Camino along side the main highway, next to the
turn-off for the lake bed.

Caption: "Alright, commie, let's see what you're up to."

4 - Hal standing alone in the center of the frame in mid-transformation to
GL uniform.

Caption (ital): "Alright, time to cut loose a little..."

5 - small frame, Hal standing in the center of the frame, right arm extended
toward the sky.

Hal: "I want to fly"

6 - same size frame, plume of dust where Hal stood, Green streak going
upward from the sand."

Hal (burst): "YYYYYYAAAAAAEEEEEEHHHH..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 8

1 - Hal, going straight up, desert landscape far below.

Caption (ital): "Faster... FASTER..."

2 - Guy, staring straight up into the evening sky at a green streak.

Guy: "What the..."

3 - Hal, still going straight up, breaking the sound barrier.

Sound: "BOOOMMM!!!"

4 - Hal floating in space, just above the Earth's atmosphere.

Hal: "oh my God..."

5 - Hal center of the frame (rear view) staring at the moon.

Hal: "..."

6 - Surface of the moon, shadowed Sinestro (rear view) staring at a cloud
covered Earth, small green speck in the center.

Sinestro: "..."

7 - Close up of Sinestro's eyes.

Caption (ital): "interesting... "

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 9

1 - Hal, looking back down at the Earth.

Hal: "Down now!"

2 - Hal standing once again in the desert landscape.

Caption (ital): "I made a hand earlier with this thing, and the ghost said
it can do anything I want it to..."

Caption (ital): "Just will it to happen and it will"

3 - Glowing green recreation of the X-23 jet sitting in the center of the
lakebed.

Hal: "Amazing"

Hal: "bigger, much bigger."

4 - Glowing green replica of a B52 bomber

5 - Close up of Hal, looking surprised as a hand appears on his shoulder.

Guy (off panel): "OK, alien commie freak..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 10

1 - Full shot of Guy standing before Hal, bomber jacket on, aiming his
pistol at Hal's face.

Guy: "I don't know what you are, but I always knew you were too normal to be
human."

Hal: "Give me a break Guy, I can explain..."

2 - Close up of gun nozzle, Guy looking very pissed off.

Guy (burst): "Don't give me that $#!^..."

Hal (off panel): "Guy, listen, I got this ring from the crash..."

3 - (closer) Close up of the nozzle, only Guys mouth visible from behind it,
gritting his teeth.

Guy (burst): "I said shut the $%@# up and put you hands on your head."

Hal (off panel): "Guy, you know me, just listen..."

4 - Close up, side shot of the pistol discharging.

Guy (off panel Burst): "I SAID SHUT THE $%!# UP!!!"

Sound: BAMM!!!

5 - close up of Hal's face eyes closed at the sound of the gun shot, bullet
stopped in mid air in front of his face.

6 - Same shot, Hal opening up one eye.

7 - Same shot, bullet falling from it's stationary perch. Hal is very pissed
off.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 11

1 - Gardner being punched in the stomach hard by Hal, as a transparent green
hand tosses the gun away into the distance.

Hal (burst): "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU, YOU BRAIN DAMAGED IDIOT???"

2 - close up of Guy gritting his teeth.

Guy (burst): "Go ahead, freak, kill me.

Hal (off panel): "I'm not going to kill you..."

3 - shot of Guy over Hal's shoulder, Hal's looking over his shoulder at what
Guy is staring at, Guy's expression is of sheer terror.

Hal (off panel): What...?

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 12
Chapter 4: The Rogue


1 - Full page shot of both Hal & Guy caught in a large explosion, Hal is
surrounded by protective aura, Guy is shielded from the blast by an energy
construct, but still thrown backward by the blasts concussion

Sound effect: KRAKOOM!!!

2 - Small frame in the bottom right corner of the page. Close-up on Hal's
surprised face.

Sinestro (off panel): "You have something that belongs to me boy..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 13

1 - long vertical panel of Sinestro hovering above Hal's head. Sinestro is
infected with the LEGION virus, black & yellow veins covering his GL
uniform.

Hal: "..."

Sinestro: "I have been watching you Jordan, you are not worth my time to
infect, hand over the ring and I will kill you quickly."

Hal: "... I have no idea who the hell you are or how you know my name,
but...

Sinestro: "Our rings share a bond idiot, I know who everything about you,
family, friends... everything. Give me the ring now or I will kill them as
well for sport."

2 - Hal, fists & teeth clenched.

Hal: "I don't think so, Pinky."

3 - Hal being slammed in the face with an enormous yellow fist, the
protective aura surrounding him shattering on the impact.

Sinestro: "I was hoping you'd say that..."

Hal: "Gah!"

4 - Hal picking himself off the ground.

Caption: Yellow... ring doesn't work against yellow. Dammit.

5 - Hal being slammed to the ground by a large yellow hand construct.

Sinestro (off panel): "I repeat, give me the ring... NOW!"

6 - Hal, faced pushed into the desert floor... spitting dirt out of his
mouth.

Hal: "Pfft... How about...

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 14

1 - Hal rolled onto his back, Sinestro in the fore ground being slammed in
the head by a giant green boxing glove (purple blood splatter coming out of
his mouth).

Hal (burst): "NO!!!"

2 - Sinestro on the ground, evil grin on his face, blood trickling down his
chin from the split lip.

Sinestro: "Oooh, this is going to be fun. Uncle Sinestro is going to take
you & everyone you love apart for that, boy.."

Hal: "Yeah, I heard you the first time."

3 - Hal produces a large spear and hurtles it at Sinestro.

4 - The spear breaks upon impact against a yellow shield manifested by
Sinestro.

Sinestro: "Are you done yet?"

5 - Hal being back handed by a very large yellow hand construct.

Sinestro: "you could have just given me the ring, and I'd have killed you
quickly, but now, I'm going to make sure it hurts... real bad."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 15

1 - Hal shooting an energy beam at Sinestro.

Hal Caption (ital): "How the hell am I supposed to beat this guy...?"

2 - Sinestro using the same yellow shield to stop the beam.

3 - Sinestro shooting 3 yellow "ninja star" like weapons from his ring at
Hal.

Sinestro: "is that the best you have rookie, even Abin had more imagination
than that."

4 - Hal avoiding 2 of them, the third grazes his left shoulder.

Hal: "nnnhhh..."

Hal Caption (ital): "Dammit, he's right, if he can block anything I send at
him, I've got to get creative..."

5 - Hal standing holding two M16 machine guns, unleashing a barrage of
gunfire at Sinestro.

6 - Bullets disintegrating upon impact with a yellow barrier field seen from
the view over Hal's shoulder. Sinestro, behind the barrier is laughing
maniacally and producing something large with his ring to hit Hal with.

Sinestro: "BWAH-HA-HA-HA..."

Hal Caption (ital): "OK, this sucks... Oh $#!^!"

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 16

1 - Hal being hit in the wounded left shoulder with a yellow mallet looking
weapon that shatters a green shield Hal produced at the last second.
Sinestro off panel still laughing hysterically.

Sinestro off panel: "HAHAHAHAH..."

Hal Caption (ital): "Damn that hurt."

Hal Caption (ital): "this is not working... need to think 3
dimensionally..."

2 - Hal being pinned to the ground with yellow chains spiked into the ground
Sinestro (still laughing).

Sinestro: "HAHAHAHAHA..."

Hal: "Yeah, keep laughing funny guy... Won't be laughing when I kick you're
ass from here to Alpha Centauri."

Hal Caption (ital): "Alpha Centari? Yeah, you're really scary Jordan."

3 - Sinestro standing above Hal. Hal's right side & hand is facing the
reader, so Sin is on his left. Hal's pointing his ring finger towards the
ground a small beam of light entering the ground.

Sinestro: "haaa... You have spirit Jordan, maybe I should infect you after
all. then we can kill your family together."

Hal: "Go to Hell psycho"

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 17

1 - Full page shot of Sinestro being blown off the ground, rock and debris
filling the sky, and a beam of green energy in the center of the explosion.
The top of the beam is in the shape of a giant fist.

Sinestro: "GAAHHH!!!"

2 - small frame, bottom left corner, Guy Gardner waking with a start on the
desert floor.

Guy: "whu...?"
3 - small frame, bottom right corner, Hal raising up, the yellow chains
falling, off.

Hal Caption (ital): "Free... need to find cover..."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 18

1 - Sinestro on the ground with Hal jumping into the crater he made in the
background.

Sinestro: "rrrr..."

2 - Sinestro leaping into the air.

Sinestro: "Don't hide, rookie... you're supposed to be fearless..."

3 - View from inside the crater looking up at the floating Sinestro.

Sinestro: "or are the mighty Guardians giving their rings to the first
person they come across...?"

Hal (off panel): "It's called Guerilla warfare you pink pansy...

4 - Hal leaping out of the crater hurtling rock and debris at Sinestro.

Hal: "Now shut it, you're giving me a damn headache."

5 - Sinestro blocks the debris, but doesn't see the giant baseball bat,
swinging towards him from behind.

6 - Sinestro slammed from behind by the bat.

Hal Caption (ital): "Gotta, keep him off balance, hit him with everything
I've got..."

7 - Sinestro smashed upside the head with the same bat.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 19

1 - Hal in the air, shooting energy constructs out of his ring.

Hal Caption (ital): "Fall dammit..."

2 - aerial shot looking down on Sinestro being pummeled by green fists,
thrown rocks. Sinestro unsuccessfully deflecting most of the shots.

3 - Closer shot of Hal, sweat pouring down his brow gritting his teeth.

Hal Caption (ital): "Fall..."

4 - Shot of Guy Gardner crawling towards his pistol.

5 - Ground level shot of Sinestro looking beaten to a bloody pulp. Ring hand
clenched into a fist.

Sinestro: "I will... not... be beaten... by you..."

6 - Shot from behind Sinestro looking skyward towards Hal, a yellow energy
beam shooting from his ring.

7 - wide shot of dry lakebed landscape. Energy beam missing Hal by a mile,
green energy lifting Hal's jeep off the desert floor.

Hal Caption (ital): "That's it... you're going down."

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 20

1 - ¾ page shot of jeep being slammed on top of Sinestro in a large
fireball.

2 - Guy shielding his eyes from the explosion.

3 - Hal floating downward.

4 - Hal landing on his feet.

5 - Hal dropping to his knees.

6 - Hal falling flat on his face, unconscious.

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 21

1 - Guy walking near the destruction seeing a hand in the wreckage.

2 - shot looking down on the unconscious body of Sinestro.

Guy: "Oh my God.

3 - Same shot, LEGION infection veins fading away.

4 - Same shot, fading a bit more...

5 - Same shot, veins completely gone, revealing a GL Uniform.

6 - Close up shot of Sinestro's face as he opens his eyes.

Sinestro: "Please, help me before..."

7 - Silhouetted shot of Sinestro as Guy unloads his pistol into him. Blood
splatter everywhere.

Guy: "DIE alien!!!"

GREEN LANTERN: Legends of the Corps - issue 2 page 22

1 - Shot of Sinestros ring hand , yellow ring glowing.

Guy (off panel): "...scumbag..."

2 - Shot of Guys hand taking the ring off Sinestros dead hand.

3 - Guy placing the ring on his own finger.

Guy: "Whu..."

4 - full shot of Guy writhing in agony as yellow veins begin to cover his
body.

Guy: "AAARRRGGGHHH!!!"

5 - Side view of Guy holding his head, yellow veins coming out of the ring
on his right hand.

6 - Guy, hands by his side, calm look on his face.

Guy (whisper): "Qward."

7 - Guy leaping into the night sky, flying upward.

8 - Desert landscape shot of Hal lying face down on the ground, flaming
wreck behind him, Guy just a yellow speck in the distant sky.


TO BE CONTINUED...


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Very cool images LanternLad. I haven't been able to read all of the script yet, but since Hal's my favorite DC character, I'll be sure to come back and see your updates!

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Thank you Drake... I was attempting to upload some others, but the files are too big.

Please let me know what you think of the script when you've finished reading it!


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LL, this is great! I'm not a GL fan normally so don't know the characters, but you have established very distinct personality for them in this peice - I don't know if they are true to the comic or not but they're certainly fun to read. I also liked the pictures you provided too. Great stuff, more, more, more!

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The SECOND PART of the story so far (first draft, not in script form). In this, the original version, John Stewart had a very minor (if any) role. I have yet to convert it into a script. But, you'll at least see where I am going with my plot. The final part of the first major arc to follow...

ENJOY!

-Chapter 5: The Aftermath-

Hal awoke with a start. Still feeling groggy from the fight. He stands up
and wobbles over to the wreckage of his jeep. He glances down at his right
hand surprised that it was still gloved...

Hal - "Well, I still have the ring, so I guess I won."

He approaches the lifeless body of Sinestro, noticing the pistol on the
ground next to what's left of the aliens head. What he could only assume was
the aliens blood staining the desert landscape. Hal noticed Sinestro's body
was no longer in the black & yellow outfit, but was now clothed in black &
green...

H - "Well, I guess I have someone to thank for taking him out of the
pict..."

He noticed the missing ring. His mind began racing, someone had seen what
happened. He saw footprints in the sand and began following them until he
saw, in the distance, an El Camino with the Wisconsin plate: "GUYSRYD". Hal
quickly puts 2 and 2 together.

H - "Ah, crap. Now what..."

His ring begins to glow once more and the spectral figure of Abin Sur
appears once again before him.

Abin - "Well, we are impressed by what you have accomplished, but it appears
as though Sinestro's ring has escaped. The guardians will want you to find
it. We can trace its trail easy enough... the rings natural instinct will
most likely be to link up with others."

As Abin 's spirit looked upwards as he spoke, Hal began to realize what this
entails.

H - "Just hang on a minute Casper... I've gone along with your little roller
coaster ride so far... and I am willing to stick with it. But, I am not
going anywhere right now. I have obligations that I can't just abandon. As
fun as galavanting through space might be, you're going to have to tell your
masters to wait."

A - "That is not acceptable. You must find someone that can fulfill your
obligations while you are away."

H - "Ain't gonna happen chief. I'm in the military, I can't go anywhere. I'm
due to stand down in less than a month, once that happens I'll be free of
some obligations. Besides, I think I need some more practice with this thing
before I try anything like deep-space flying."

A - "I will report back to the Guardians with this information. Since your
obligations are military based, they may be understanding. If they do
concur, they will most likely send their chief trainer here to help you
'practice'. If they do not concur, we will have to find a replacement for
you & wipe your mind clean of our existence."

H - "Fine, now what do I do with this mess?"

A - "Command your ring to send Sinestro's body back to OA, after that you
can vaporize the wreckage, bury it, send it into space, we honestly don't
care. Actually, don't send it into space, you never know what may happen if
you do that"

H - "Right, sure... what's an 'Oh Ahh'?"

A - "it is the planet at the very center of the known Universe, the home of
the Guardians, and the headquarters of the Green Lantern Corps. For safety
reasons, only those bearing a ring of power can find it. Just aim the ring,
and will his body to OA. By the way, your friend that finished Sinestro off,
seems a bit... unhinged."

H - "Yeah, you don't know the half of it. Think it's his upbringing... where
he comes from they come out brain damaged."

Hal aimed his ring finger at Sinestro's body and thought to himself "Go to
OA", in a flash of light Sinestro's body was gone as was Abin Sur's spectral
form.

H - "OK, so I'm on my own now. Fun."

Hal scooped up the wreckage of his jeep and dumped it in the largest of the
craters he created during the fight & covered it up. Can't drive Guy's car
back without Guy, people will wonder where he is. Best to leave it here and
fly back. I hope this thing has "stealth mode"... he thought as he shot off
in the direction of the air base.

-CHAPTER 6: INK BLOTTS & FLYING LESSONS-

Fisherman's wharf, San Francisco. Abel Tarrant sits in "Captain Carl's
Tattoos & Piercing Studio" as "Captian Carl" - an obese ex-sailor, put the
finishing touches on his latest creation. At the age of 17 a friend
introduced Abel to the Wiccan religion. The thought of doing spells &
enchantments thrilled him; However, by the age of 19 Abel decided that the
Wiccan religion was a bit passe. 2 years of herbs & communing with nature
were not what he signed up for. He needed a bit more excitement in his life,
and besides, he always preferred the darker side of life. He renounced his
Wiccan ways and became a Warlock. To date, has covered almost 60% of his
body in tattoos of various sizes & shapes. Abel has designed the majority of
his tattoos basing them off of creatures & images he'd seen in the "Book of
Shadows". One night after a particularly nasty evening of binge drinking &
ritual animal sacrifice, he decided to imbed his talisman just beneath the
skin of his neck. This particular stone (the Talisman of Venus) coupled with
the ritualistic tattoos had a startling effect. He discovered (quite
painfully) that he could bring these tattoos to life & that they would do
his bidding. His newest Tattoo, that of a large serpent, would come in quite
handy with what he is planning... After all, what's an Apocalypse without a
giant serpent?

Edwards Air Force Base Flight Test Center, California. Lt. Hal Jordan stands
in hanger 10 next to the F-15 Eagle he had just flew. He stands there
wondering if he'll miss the military life once he leaves in 2 weeks. Then
again, he is trading in one military existence for another as the newly
appointed Green Lantern of Sector 2814. The investigation into the
disappearance of Lt. Guy Gardner had produced no results, which was no
surprise since Hal alone knew the truth behind Guy's mysterious
disappearance. A big an ass as Guy was, he was the least likely person to go
AWOL. In fact, Hal was sure that Guy would be in the service for life.

As Hal changed out of his flight suit he was approached by an incredibly
large man dressed in fatigues. His name tag sported the name & title: Capt.
K.I. Lowog.

K - "You Lt. Jordan?"

Hal - "Yes sir!"

The large captain smiled at Jordan.

K - "At Ease Lt... Good, military types always know how to show the proper
respect."

H - "I'm sorry sir...?"

The large man Looked around to make sure no one was lurking nearby (since
humans were always so nosy). Satisfied that they were alone, he turned back
to Hal and said, in a very hushed manner...

K - "My name is Kilowog & I've been sent by to begin your training."

H - "What training? I'm set to discharge in 2 weeks, my schedule is already
set..."

K - "Not that you poozer, the Guardians sent me. You are pretty sprockin'
dense, ain't ya? You're my new meat."

H - "I only understood about half of what you said... I didn't know the
Corps had other human members."

K - "I'm not human, I'm from Bolovax Vik in sector 674. I'm in disguise...
trust me, anyone sees me the way I really look on this mud ball, well... you
just wait, you'll see what I mean. So, you off for the night?"

H - "In about an hour, I have to report in to control on how the plane
handled."

K - "Great, I'll take the time to check out some of these aircraft of
yours... I love machinery, and I get to see some interesting specimens on
all these planets I'm sent to. I wanna see how your machines hold up to some
of the others..."

H - "OK, great... just don't touch anything."

An hour later the pair headed out again into the desert, this time in a
borrowed military jeep. When they arrive at the lake bed, Hal receives
another start as Kilowog shows his true face.

H - "Wow"

K - "Yeah, I get that a lot from folks that never seen another species
before. So this is where you took out Sinestro, eh? I always figured one of
us would have to take him down, guy always was a bit... intense."

H - "So I've heard. I didn't kill him though, that was Guy... another pilot
like me. He was always a bit... intense too. "

K - "Yeah, we know... we were able to learn quite a bit from Sin's Corpse.
There were still traces of the Legion Virus in him. It looks like the virus
originated in the anti-matter universe of Qward. Looks like another scheme
to try and invade our Universe... they've never been quite this successful
before. First rule of inter-dimensional warfare, make your enemies destroy
themselves, then come on in & collect your prize. You know you're the first
to beat an infected Corpsman... How'd you do it?

H - "I'm still trying to get my mind around half of what you just said...
what's a Qward?"

K - "Alright, we'll get into that later... let's get some training under
your belt, then we'll find out how a rookie beat, arguably, one of our best.
Have you tried flying yet.?"

H - "A bit... I've gone straight up, straight down & I did some defensive
flying against him."

K - "Don't just stand there yacking about it junior, show me."

Hal shows Kilowog some of what he's done. Kilowog gives Hal some pointers on
speed control, stopping & air combat. Kilowog is quite impressed, although
he thinks pilots usually are naturals when it comes to flight. As dawn
begins to break the sky is suddenly overrun with clouds & it begins to
rain...

K - "You People have some sprockin' weird weather."

H - "This isn't natural... it's raining blood"

K - "Well, in my experience anytime it starts raining blood, it's a bad
thing.

H - "Jeez, ya think? We need to find out what's going on."

K - "Will the ring to show us the source of the problem ... and don't be
such a poozer."

Pointing his ring towards the sky, Hal shoots off a blast of green energy
and almost instantaneously an image appears in front of him. A lone figure
in a cloak stand on Alcatraz island summoning black energies from deep with
in San Francisco bay upwards into the atmosphere. He is surrounded by
several large beasts of various shape & size, destroying the old prison
walls and terrorizing tourists.

K - "Well, time to prove yourself hotshot, show me what you've got."

H - "Ah crap."

-CHAPTER 7: Hell or San Franscisco?-

Hal Jordan is flying at super-sonic speed towards San Francisco and he is
not happy. Kilowog, his trainer, follows, but at a distance... Kilowog feels
that this is the perfect opportunity to test Hal's battle prowess. Not to
mention that Humans have never seen anything quite like a Green Lantern
before, and to see another odd creature like a Bolvaxian might cause a bit
more panic. In moments Hal arrives at Alcatraz island and is astonished at
the sight before him. A lone figure stands upon one of the prison walls,
hands raised in the air, chanting, and sending dark energies skyward. He is
flanked by a giant spider wrapping tourists in it's web & a large serpent
attempting to swallow a ferry boat whole. Hal produces a giant emerald fist
and machete using his ring of power. He slugs the man on the wall with the
fist & uses the machete to start cutting the tourists free of the spiders
web.

Hal - "Hey pal, knock it off, you're scaring the tourists. And tell your pet
snake to drop the boat."

Hal thinking to himself, " drop the boat? I suck at this witty banter thing"

The "dark energies" ceased when Hal hit the man. The man recovered quickly
springing to his feet & ripping off his cloak revealing a very pissed off
Abel Tarrant.

The Tattooed Man - "How dare you strike the Tattooed Man, I'll see you burn
in my Hell for that, Hero."

Hal thinking again, "OK, Tattooed Man? He's worse at the banter than I am.
At least I have a cooler handle."

H - "It's Green Lantern pal and I'm taking you... JESUS!"

Hal is stopped mid-sentence by the sight of Abel conjuring one of his
creatures.
The Venus stone embedded under the skin of Abel's neck glows blood red as a
giant Phoenix violently & bloodily rips off of his back and flies straight
at Hal.

H - "That's nasty... and lucky me it's a giant flaming YELLOW bird. I could
really use some help here Kilowog!"

An image of Kilowog's head appears next to him.

Kilowog - "Nah, You're doin' great! Bit of advise though, that flamin' birds
gonna be a problem, you might wanna give him a bath."

As Hal is distracted, the Tattooed Man once again continues his chanting &
conjuring of the "dark energies". Hal dives straight for the bay, with the
Phoenix closing in fast. Hal pulls up at the last possible moment... but so
does the Phoenix. Catching Hal off guard & singing him a bit.

H - "this thing's worse than a heat-seeking missile. Let's try something
different."

Hal uses the ring to produce a duplicate of himself & sends it flying off in
a different direction attempting to distract the bird. Instead the bird
follows suit duplicating itself and begins to pursue both Hal's. Not quite
what he was planning at all.

H - "well if this thing will follow me wherever I go, looks like I'm taking
a bath..."

Hal & his duplicate merge again, as does the bird & he plunges once again
straight down towards the bay as close to the island as he possibly can.
Instead of pulling up though he hits the water at an angle, hard enough to
generate a huge wave. The bird is immediately extinguished and vanishes. The
Tattooed man is struck suddenly with searing pain as the tattoo of the
flaming bird reappears on his back. Caught off guard by the pain, he doesn't
see the second part of the 1-2 punch as the wave hits him head on, knocking
him off the wall. Abel hits the ground hard and gashes the area on his arm
where the new serpent tattoo resides. Immediately the giant serpent (still
working on swallowing the boat whole) writhes in pain and disappears. This
catches Hal's attention and he pays special attention to what happens next.

The Tattooed Man rises again, holding his bloody arm. Hal lands on the
island finally and they stare each other down.

T - "All right 'Green Lantern', let's play."

H - "Bring it on kid"

The Venus Stone begins to glow blood red and tattoos begin ripping from his
body. Hal realizes there are 2 possible ways to stop him... cut him, or
remove the stone from his neck. As various creatures close down on Hal, he
conjures his machete again and begins slicing at them. It slows them down
but doesn't stop them. He needs to clear some of these away so he can get a
clear shot at the stone in the Tattooed Man's neck. Hal manifests an M-60
machine gun and begins unleashing a glowing barrage of green bullets at the
tattoo creatures. As they begin to fall he realizes that the Tattooed man is
writhing on the ground in paid with each bullet strike. Seizing the
opportunity, Hal uses his machete to cut a few of the tattoos, quickly
giving himself some breathing room before using the machete to swipe the
stone from Abel's
neck.

Instantly all of the tattoo creatures disappear and the Tattooed man looses
consciousness. The clouds in the sky lift revealing the mid-morning sky. The
authorities begin to appear as Hal takes to the sky again heading home with
the Venus stone in his hand. Kilowog flies up next to him...

K - "Not bad rookie, I thought you were toast though when that thing
duplicated."

H - "Yeah, thanks for the assist there you big Warthog. Hang on a second..."

The stone in his hand began to burn, using an energy blast from the ring Hal
disintegrates it. Both Green Lanterns head back to the Air base.

K - "So, you gonna finally tell me how you K.O.'d Sinestro?"

H - "Sure, you ever heard of a jeep? Turns out their really heavy..."


END

Up Next: The Guardians of the Universe
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Part 3 the first major arc finale (yes I do have more, but incomplete & in very rough draft form)

GREEN LANTERN - Legends of the Corps
-PLAN OF ATTACK-

-CHAPTER 8: The Corps-

TV reporter - "Who is this mysterious Green Lantern? Seen here in this
amateur video taken 2 weeks ago on Alcatraz island, the Emerald Gladiator
combats the Satanic Abel Tarrant, also known as 'The Tattooed Man'. Thanks
to this secretive hero, there were only minor injuries.

Brigadier General Alan Scott sits in his living room nursing a glass of
brandy & a cigar, watching his TV, astonished with everything he sees on the
screen. Not knowing how he feels about seeing another wearing the symbol...
Green Lantern, is that what it meant? This is definitely tied in to the
crash of the craft in the desert... but it's not like he can actually bring
this up to his commanding officer. It has been decades since he thought
about that night in the jungles of Vietnam. It had haunted him for years,
until one day he had wished he could forget, and by shear force of will, he
apparently had. Seeing the symbol in the desert again had re-awakened the
memories. It took so long to get his life back on track, and after all he
has accomplished... His wife Molly, in the kitchen...

Molly - "Is everything alright dear? You got so quiet suddenly..."

Alan - "Yeah, just watching the news."

TV Reporter - Since that day there have been multiple sightings throughout
California... just last week he
foiled 4 bank robberies, 2 car-jackings and assisted authorities in rescuing
a missing child lost in the Angeles National Forest.

Skip to an 8 year old child with black tousled hair with the name 'Kyle
Rayner' under his picture. The boy holds a rough sketch of Green Lantern
done with pencils & crayons.

Kyle Rayner - "...and then he swooped down from the sky and picked me up.
I'm gonna be just like him when I grow up!"

TV Reporter - "any attempts to interview the hero have been unsuccessful.
Now onto the situation in Middle East, President Bu..."

Hal Jordan, Green Lantern of Sector 2814, switches off his television and
glances over at the large alien (disguised as a very large man) known as
Kilowog, Green Lantern of sector 674.

Hal - "Emerald Gladiator? Where do they come up with this stuff?"

Kilowog - "Ah, give 'em a break... you're a big time hero! They've never
seen anyone or anything quite like you.

H - "Yeah they have... there's a guy in Metropolis that flies around pulling
cats out of trees all the time. And some lunatic in Gotham that dresses like
a bat... Hell, there were even stories back in the 50's & 60's of masked
'mystery men'. Great, I'm going to end up with a bunch of lunatics chasing
me down every day now, aren't I?"

K - "Eh, probably... It happens to all of us. Don't let it get to your head
like Sinestro... Man, that guy had an ego and he was a bit of a neat
freak... which you are definitely not."

Hal shoots Kilowog a dirty look and retreats to his final bag. As if going
over an invisible checklist...

H - "Well, that's it. The bags are packed and I'm officially 'discharged'.
I've notified Ferris Aircraft that I'm taking some time off before starting
up... let my mom & brother know I'll be 'out of town' for a bit. So, out of
one mans military & into another's, I suppose, when do we leave?"

K - "Well, you've been putting the Guardians off for a month, and that isn't
a wise thing to do, so I'd say... Now would be a real good time."

Before leaving both stepped up to their Lantern Batteries & recited their
sacred oath...

H & K - "In brightest day, in blackest night, no evil shall escape my sight.
Let those who worship evil's might beware my power, the Green Lantern's
light!!!"

They stepped out of the barracks together into the night air. Hal glimpsed
back over his shoulder looking back on the life he's about to leave behind.
A rush of excitement came over him... finally a chance to see the stars up
close & personal. When both of them were sure no one was around, they donned
their uniforms & took flight into the desert sky.

General Scott, looking from his porch into the southern night sky sees the 2
green streaks taking off from the desert floor. Thinking to himself: "I
thought this part of my life was over..."

K - "Now, I'm gonna warn ya, Warp flight can be a bit disorienting for
newbies. But it shaves about 3 million light years off the trip to OA, so
it's a must. Are you ready?"

H - "I was born ready big guy."

K - "Heh, yeah, right. Alright, you need to concentrate on OA. Put all you
willpower behind it... and don't break your concentration. The trip will
take about 5 of your Earth minutes... Lose your concentration & you could
fly right through a star or bounce too close to a supernova..."

H - "...and that would end my trip real quick, wouldn't it? OK, got it, Han.
Can we get going now?"

Kilowog looking confused...

K - "Alright wise guy, don't get lost & I'll see you on the other side."

With a flash of Green light Hal was alone. Hal took a moment to look at his
surroundings. He had been so wrapped up in the conversation he hadn't
realized he was outside of the atmosphere. Looking to his left he saw the
moon, so close he thought he could reach out & touch it... He looked behind
him and saw the Earth. as a ghostly figure quickly interrupts him.

Abin Sur - "A-hem. They are waiting for you, you know."

H - "Never been this close to the moon before...or so far from home"

A - "You will get used to it. Now it's time."

Placing his ringed glove out before him, Hal concentrates on OA. In flash of
green light, he is suddenly transported into what he can only think of as an
enormous green wormhole. "Oh God, I think I'm going to be sick... got to
concentrate on OA. OA. OA. OA... O. A... After what feels like an eternity
(4 minutes later), he emerges on the other side of the wormhole. Before him
set's a small gray planet, not unlike Earth's moon, which he hopes is OA. A
tall humanoid figure with a birdlike beak & a fin on the top of his head
approaches Hal from the right.

Tomar Re - "Greetings, Green Lantern of 2814, I am Tomar Re of the planet
Xudar in sector 2813. It was, unfortunate, to learn of Abin Sur's demise,
but it is always a pleasure to meet a new corpsman. Especially since we are
neighbors!"

H - "thanks... I'm gonna puke. Blllarrrgh..."

T - "Well, not exactly the way I was hoping to meet your successor Abin."

Abin Sur's spirit, once again appears emanating from the ring.

A - "Oh, do not despair Tomar, he grows on you... like a tarrelian fungus.
Hal, you are here now to complete your training. It is time for me to
depart. I can help you no longer, but I leave you in good hands..."

Abin Sur's ghostly visage leaves Hal's ring and becomes one with the massive
Central Power Battery below.

T - "your ring will now bond with your mind. It will take on your
personality traits. The Guardians have called a meeting of the elite force &
your presence has been requested. Looks like you'll be joining us for our
next mission."

The 2 Lanterns fly through the Oan atmosphere and touch down before the
Central Power Battery, in essence, a giant Green Lantern, not unlike the one
he uses to charge his ring. Below the power battery was a building draped in
flags bearing the GL symbol, above the door a sign read "The Hall of
Remembrance"... a thought suddenly dawning on Hal. With all the Green
Lantern's walking about the grounds, he could understand what everyone was
saying, no matter what species was speaking. He could read every posted
sign, which were all printed in English.

H - "Tomar, is English, like, the universal language or what?"

T - "No, Hal... your ring also acts as a universal translator. It will
translate any word written, or spoken, by every race in the galaxy, and some
beyond. It will not, however, translate words that have no direct
translation to your language... Hence, the 'Sprocking Poozer & such that you
hear from Kilowog all the time."

H - "Huh, I actually thought I knew the translation for those. This is
pretty cool.

Directly across from the Central Power Battery is the main citadel. Home of
the Guardians of the Universe. As Hal entered the Citadel an enormous hand
smacked him on the back...

K - "Hey tough guy, you made it! I thought you were lost it took you so
long. How was the flight?"

H - "Aside from the vomiting, I can't complain."

K - "I told you it could be a bit hairy for fresh meat. Come with me, the
Guardians are about to meet with the corps elite."

As they Make their way into the main audience chamber, Hal feels like he's
entered a massive courtroom. The circular room is surrounded on all sides by
a 12 foot yellow wall... in fact, now that he thought about it, all the
buildings on this planet were yellow. Curious. The floor of the main
audience chamber had a massive GL symbol in the center. Upon the walls
surrounding the chamber sat 36 chairs, Hal assumed they were for the
Guardians. Within the chamber were 5 other Green Lanterns (including
Kilowog), none paying him much attention. No 2 Lanterns seemed to be the
same... except for a pink skinned female, that looked as if she could have
been related to Sinestro. That's when Hal noticed there was a 6th Lantern,
that looked oddly enough, like a 2 foot tall chipmunk.

H - "Kilowog, is that chipmunk a Lantern too?"

K - "That's Ch'p, and it would be best not to say that too loud, he's got a
bit of a mean streak when someone comments on his size."

H - "OK, this is so bizarre..."

The doors behind them closed and all lights, except one green light focusing
directly on them, went out. The ceiling of the hall and the walls behind the
Guardians Dais became a map of the Universe, the light in the center of the
ceiling signifying OA. This was one of the most amazing things Hal had ever
seen. Then, one by one the Guardians of the Universe filtered into the room,
each of the 36 members floating down from the center light. The Guardians
were approximately 4 feet tall, with light blue skin, white (balding) hair,
wearing robes of black and green, with red cloaks. The black on their
uniforms was covered in Stars, matching the background behind each seat. The
Guardian in the center of the room stepped forward and spoke without moving
his lips.

Guardian - "Elite corpsman, you have been gathered here for a most grievous
assignment. Which may result in your deaths."

Hal thinks, "Jeez, welcome to the Corps, have a few laughs, fly across the
universe & get yourself killed..."


-CHAPTER 9: The Guardians-

Hal Jordan, newly appointed Green Lantern of Sector 2814, finds himself in a
most awkward position. He stands before the Guardians of the Universe (whom
he can't shake the thought that they look like big Smurfs) who, after only a
month on the job, have apparently recruited him into the Corps Elite. A
group of 6 Green Lanterns including: Kilowog (from sector 674), Tomar Re
(from sector 2813), Chaselon (from sector 3319), Katma Tui (from sector
1417), Salakk (from sector 1418) & Ch'p (from sector 1014).

Guardian - "The new Green Lantern of sector 2814 was able to defeat
Sinestro, original Green Lantern of sector 1417. In the fight, Sinestro
perished. We have learned something of the origins of the LEGION virus
through the body of Sinestro."

Hal shifted uncomfortably when he noticed he was being glared at from the
female GL that looked a bit like Sinestro. The first Guardian sits back down
in his chair. A second Guardian, two seats to the originals left, rises.

Guardian 2 - "The genetic makeup of the virus contained within his body
suggests that it came from the Anti-Matter Universe Qward. According to the
report from Green Lantern 2814, the virus alters the defensive powers of the
ring. This is most likely done in order to stop the ring from automatically
expelling the virus. An unfortunate byproduct, at least from the viruses
point of view, of this change is the ring no longer automatically protects
the barer from harm. The barer must produce shielding in order to protect
himself. This is fortunate for us.

A third Guardian arises as the second sits.

Guardian 3 - "We believe that the Qwardians are infecting Corpsmen to create
their own army. Once this army swells to it's desired number, they will use
this army to attack OA directly. Once we have been destroyed, the Corps will
effectively neutralized. The Qwardians will swarm this universe and without
the Corps to defend it, they will conquer.

A fourth Guardian arises across the hall, while the third sits.

Guardian 4 - "According to our calculations, the infected Lanterns will
attack OA within the next 36 cycles (48 Earth hours). We have sent out a
call to arms. Every remaining uninfected Lantern will be here within one
cycle. They will be our last line of defense. But know this, if you do not
succeed, and the defending Lanterns cannot stop these marauders, we will be
forced to destroy the main power battery."

A collective gasp reverberated through all the Lanterns (except for Hal who
just stood there dumfounded) at the mere thought of this.

G4 - "We are aware that this will, in effect, destroy the corps. It will
also stop the infected rings, we will then use our power to stop the
Qwardians from advancing into our Universe. We would much rather not destroy
the Corps if possible. To that end, as the elite force, it is your charge to
stop this from happening. You will enter the Anti Matter Universe, find the
source of the Legion virus, destroy it and get out. According to our
research, once this is done, all the infected rings will be cured."

Kilowog - "Masters, we accept the assignment and we will stop the Qwardians
from invading!"

Hal - "Hang on there big fella... Excuse me, Guardians... sirs. How are we
supposed to defend ourselves against an army that wields power like this?
Before I figured out how to beat him, which I still attribute to blind luck,
Sinestro was kicking my butt in a bad way. We won't even have the element of
surprise on our side, don't these rings, infected or not, speak to each
other? And why is it that I'm included in the elite Corps? I barely know
what I am doing..."

A fifth Guardian stands as the fourth sits.

G5 - "We have developed armor that each of you will don, this armor has
multiple functions. First, it will help to protect you from the brunt of any
attack. It will not protect you fully from harm, it will only lessen the
damage. Second, the armor has been designed to shield your rings from the
others. The armor was constructed much like this Citadel... your thoughts &
your rings emissions cannot be read by anyone outside these walls. You will
don the armor before leaving here. With that, we come to the third function
of the armor, it contains life support and propulsion systems. We will open
a dimensional rift and deposit you as close to the planet Qward as we safely
can. It will then be up to you to get there undetected and carry out the
mission.

A sixth Guardian stands.

G6 - "Due to the necessary impurity of your rings, you will not be able to
use them to destroy the source, which we assume is yellow. You will attach
this explosive device to the source and detonate it with this remote when
you are clear. As to why you have been chosen to accompany this group, the
main reason is obvious... you were the only member to defeat an infected
barer. Otherwise, we feel that you have... (he looks around at the other
Guardians before continuing) potential. You will all depart within the next
cycle.

With that, the Guardians arose from their seats and floated to the top
center of the chamber. Katma Tui turning to Hal with an irritated expression
on her face.

Katma - "I don't know how the military works on Earth, Jordan. But around
here we do not question the authority of our leaders. Your duty is to take &
follow orders, understood?"

Katma turns and begins to walk off.

H - "I don't know the Guardians from Adam. As a matter of fact, the only...
thing... I trust around here is Kilowog.

Katma - "These Guardians you do not trust have kept the universe safe for 3
billion years, not to mention the little mud-ball you call home."

Katma storms off. Kilowog & Tomar Re both place their hands on Hal's chest
to stop him.

Kilowog - "Better to stop while she's ahead pooz. You may not agree, but
she's right. Besides, she's got a special bit of dislike for you. Katma was
Sinestro's alternate.

H - "His what?"

K - "In heavily populated sectors it is necessary for Green Lantern's to
select someone to stand in for them when the Lantern is called away. The
alternate would also assume the role of Green Lantern if the original was
killed. Abin Sur had an alternate, but that alternate was killed in a battle
shortly before Abin took on his final mission. He hadn't had the time to
select another. You will have to select one as well. According to your ring
though, you were one of 3 possible GL's on Earth. That's pretty unheard of."

H - "2 others? Who and why was I selected? Is it because of the potential
the Guardians said I had."

Tomar Re - "No, you were simply the closest to ground zero."

H - "That's reassuring."

-CHAPTER 10: The Weaponers of Qward-

6 months ago:

The Anti-Matter Universe of Qward. It exists slightly out of vibrational
synch with our Universe. It exists due to a mistake made by one of the
Guardians over 11 billion years ago. At the center of this Universe lies the
planet Qward, the anti-matter universe twin of OA. Qward is the governing
planet of the entire anti-matter universe. The governing body of this
Universe is the Weaponers of Qward founded by Yokal the Atrocious, and
currently led by Kiman, the Chief Weaponer. The social hierarchy of Qward
consists of the Chief Weaponer, followed by his second in command, the
Master Thunderer, leader of the Thunder Guard and just below that, the
Destroyers. Each Weaponer harnesses weapons known as Qwa-Bolts accept for
the Chief Weaponer who dons the staff of Yokal the Atrocious a staff created
by the first ruler.

Kiman had grown complacent in his rule of Qward and wished to extend his
rule to the matter universe. Every scheme he had come up with failed, until
a group of Qwardian scientists led by Vestry the Thinker developed the
Legion virus. The Legion virus is a living organism with one though
ingrained into it: "Seek and infect all Green Lanterns & destroy those that
resist". Using a Transformer Bridge that allows the Qwardians to travel from
the anti-matter universe to the matter universe, Kiman gave the Qwardians
champion, Gnaxos, a crystal orb containing the Legion virus and sent him to
infect one particular Green Lantern that Kiman so despised. Chief Weaponer
Kiman, selected Sinestro to be the test subject for the Legion virus,
because, in his time of rule, of all the Green Lanterns, it was always
either Sinestro or the Bolovaxian Kilowog, that lead to his defeat. Kilowog
was much larger, and since this was to be a test, he wanted to test it out
on a less physically formidable opponent.

Space Sector 1417 near the planet Korugar.

A portal of yellow energy opens and through it a single craft emerges. The
pilot, Gnaxos of Qward, presses a few buttons and smoke begins filling the
cockpit. He sends out a distress signal toward the planet Korugar, home of
the Green Lantern Sinestro.

The planet Korugar in the Green Lantern citadel, Sinestro instructs his
alternate (he prefers the term apprentice), the young Katma Tui in hand to
hand combat without the use of their power rings.

Sinestro - "No, no, no Katma, always defend your head. Roll with the body
shots. If you do not defend your head, you will lose. Especially against an
opponent larger than you."

Katma - "I'm sorry master, I will try harder.

S - "Yes, you will. The average brain has the consistency of warm Kutaba.
What do you suppose would happen Katma, if you were to punch warm Kutaba?"

K - "I assume it would splatter, master..."

S - "Do not assume anything Katma. Think... of course it would splatter. At
least our brains are a little more pliable and protected by our skulls, eh?
Even if some are thicker than others. I expect nothing but perfection from
you my apprentice, because I would expect nothing but perfection from
myself. Now, do it again, this time keep your left up."

Their sparring begins again as an alarm sounds in the citadel. The sound of
the alarm catches Sinestro off guard and allows Katma a right hook punch to
his jaw. Sinestro hits the ground hard and is very angry.

S - "OOF! Did you not hear the alarm? That was a cheap shot & you will be on
monitor duty for the next 48 hours straight."

Walking over to the alarm console, shutting it off which makes the monitor
spring to life.

Computer - "A small, one man courier has just entered the system. It appears
to be damaged & requires immediate assistance."

S - "Katma, stay here and watch the monitors... I have to stop this fool
before he collides with our planet and makes a mess of everything I've
built."

K - "Yes, master"

But her words go unheard as he has already flown out the roof portal. Using
all of the speed he can muster, Sinestro quickly leaves planetary orbit,
passes the Korugarian moon and reaches his destination. He wraps the ship in
an energy bubble to help contain the ships leaking atmosphere & enters the
ship to see if the imbecilic pilot needs assistance.

The hallway to the bridge was deserted, dark and full of smoke. Sinestro
uses his ring to light the passage. At the end of the hall the bridge door
sits slightly ajar with a hand on the floor blocking the door from closing
completely, more smoke billowing from the bridge. Sinestro races to the
pilot to see if he still lives. He pushes the door open and bends down to
see if the pilot is still breathing. The pilot is wearing a helmet, Sinestro
pulls the helmet free and that's when Gnaxos struck. Plunging his yellow
Qwa-Bolt into Sinestro's leg and smashing a yellow glowing crystal orb on
Sinestro's right hand.

The impact of the orb against the ring is much more devastating than Gnaxos
expected and it was the last thing he ever did. The orb exploded destroying
the ship & Gnaxos, but that was not the worst of the devastation.

When the smoke cleared, only Sinestro remained. But he was changed. When the
orb containing the Legion virus was smashed on his ring, it immediately
infected it. Spreading from the ring, yellow vein-like tendrils quickly and
painfully began to cover him. He screamed as the tendrils spread through his
chest, down his legs and up his neck. The green of his uniform began to lose
pigment and became yellow. Once the tendrils had covered his entire body,
the re-programming began. Although the virus leaves the infected persons
personality intact it does ingrain one overriding mission into the barers
mind: "Seek and infect all Green Lanterns & destroy those that resist".
Sinestro, not feeling that Katma Tui was a formidable threat nor was she an
official Green Lantern, immediately sets off for the nearest sector.

On Korugar, Katma Tui's witnesses the entire sequence of events. She
attempts to fly out to help Sinestro, but her ring stops her. A ghostly
image of Sinestro appears before her.

Sinestro's ghost - "Where do you think you're going? Do not attempt to
rescue him, he has been infected by some sort of virus. If you interfere,
you will be infected as well. We have lost all communication from his ring
except for one phrase repeating from it 'Seek and infect all Green Lanterns
& destroy those that resist'. This information was all that was able to
escape before his ring was completely overrun."

K - "Then he'll be coming for me anyway..."

SG - "He will not, he does not find you to be a threat, and you are not,
well at least not until this very moment, an official GL."

K - "Of course, arrogant bastard."

SG - "Go to OA, give the Guardians your account of what has occurred here.
They already know as much as I have told you, but they will want all your
knowledge."

-CHAPTER 11: Last Stand on Graxos IV-

5 Months later:

The Legion virus has become a widespread epidemic. Sinestro has cut a swath
of destruction across dozens of sectors. The Green Lanterns that he has
encountered in the process, he has either destroyed or infected. All those
that he has infected have, in turn, begun to infect others starting a chain
reaction unlike anything the Guardians have seen. They have lost contact
with over 900 of their agents with the number quickly rising. Something else else must
be done. But with no knowledge as to the source of the infection, there is
no way to know what to do. Their current mode of thought is that Sinestro
was the first to be infected, maybe if he is stopped the others will be
cured. The rings are all linked to the Central Power Battery, and they have
been able to track the progress made by the infected. On occasion they have
warned the GL's that the infected are nearing their sector... always
resulting in tragedy. Sinestro, currently in sector 2815, is after Fentara,
Green Lantern of that sector & of the planet Graxos IV.

Abin Sur, Green Lantern of sector 2814, has been dispatched by the Guardians
to the outer regions of sector 2815, the sector bordering his own. His
orders, to apprehend Sinestro by using conventional methods... no power ring
if possible and defend Fentara. To this end, Abin was able to pull out his
old star-fighter from his days with the Ungaran defense force. His 10 year
old son, Amon, always proud of his Green Lantern father, painted over the
Ungaran defense force emblems with Green Lantern symbols. Amon was already a
wonderful artist and Abin had high hopes that one day he would attend an art
exhibit of his sons. Little did he know, this would be the last time he
would ever see his family again.

Sector 2815, the airspace above planet Graxos IV.

Abin - "Alright, I'm not supposed to use the ring in case I am tracked,
so... Computer, lock onto the energy signature from Fentara's ring. We must
find him before Sinestro."

Computer - "Acknowledged. Processing. Location, Quadrant 3 of the mining
colony Prime, Northern Hemisphere."

A - "Excellent, plot a course, let's see if we can give him a hand so we can
get out of here."

The Mining Colony Prime, Currently the scene of a massive cave-in that
Fentara is attempting a basic search & rescue mission. Fentara is not aware
that he has been targeted by Legion. Abin's mission is to bring Fentara &
Sinestro safely back to OA, where Legion would not yet dare to go. Per the
Guardians order, Abin is not to use his ring since it would give his
position away also. This would not be the first time Abin's disobeyed an
order. Rather face the consequences than allow innocent beings harm.

Exiting the star-fighter, Abin approaches the sight of the cave-in and
speaks into his ring...

A - "Fentara, old man, this is Abin Sur, I'm here to assist you.

An image of Fentara appears on standing on the surface of Abin's ring.
Fentara is a tall, thin Elvish looking alien with blonde hair & pointed
ears.

Fentara - "Abin, old friend, it's been a while! Your assistance is most
welcome, and quite timely."

A - "I wish I could say this was the only reason for my visit, we must wrap
this rescue up quickly & leave immediately for OA."

F - "Legion is coming for me, isn't it?"

A - "Yes, and I'm already breaking protocol by helping you, so let's get to
it.

Shortly after rescuing all of the trapped miners and securing the disaster
site and boarding the star-fighter.

F - "So, who is to guard my sector while I am gone? My alternate, Arisia, is
far too young & in-experienced to handle such demands."

A - "No one, you would be condemning her to activate her now. Your sector
can spare you for a few rotations. Come now, we must get to OA before it's
too late.

Sinestro's voice echoes through the interior of the ship.

Sinestro - "Oh, Abin, it is already too late. And look at this, three for
the price of one!"

Sinestro and a very young female stood outside of the ship. The female, also
from Graxos IV, had been infected by the Legion virus.

F - "Arisia, No!"

S - "Would you look at what I found practicing at your Citadel, Fentara? She
show's such promise... Actually put up quite a fight. Nothing I couldn't
handle, of course."

Abin's star-fighter begins to lift off...

A - "There's nothing we can do for her Fentara, we must go NOW!"

Fentara ignores Abin, for he is not aware that Arisia is also his daughter,
and flies through the wall of the ship straight at Sinestro & Arisia,
blasting energy beams at Sinestro. But before any of the beams reach
Sinestro, Fentara is disintegrated by a massive yellow energy beam.
Sinestro, shocked (and irritated), looks over his shoulder at Arisia, who
stands there holding a smoking yellow cannon produced by her ring.

S - "I wanted your father alive or, at least, I wanted the kill you over
zealous half-wit,"

Arisia - "I am sorry master, it won't happen again."

Taking advantage of the poor turn of events, Abin Sur flies his
star-fighter, full throttle, into the Graxosian atmosphere.

S - "Now look what you've done, idiot! Grab your father's ring, and follow
me, we need to get Abin Sur or his ring before he escapes."

As Abin's fighter leaves the atmosphere his ship is pelted with fire, but
nothing that his shipboard shields could not handle. Suddenly the ship is
rocked by a massive explosion as his shielding is compromised. Thinking to
himself... "If I can get to my own sector, at least I might be able to lose
them". As he crosses over the unseen sector division, the fighter is
suddenly struck by more gunfire. Without the shielding his hull is
compromised. The sudden loss of atmosphere in the cabin activates his ring
and protects him, however the ring cannot protect him from the yellow
projectiles. Abin's body is struck multiple times, each wound more grievous
than the next. Wounded, alone, and unable to defend himself from Sinestro
and Arisia, Abin can think of only one defense. He must escape and at least
get the ring to safety and he only has enough power for one hyper-space
jump. Using his ring to seal the hull breaches, he attempts to plot a course
for OA, just to find the Nava-computer was destroyed in the fire fight. He
must make a blind jump...

S - "Excellent shot Arisia, there is hope for you yet... ABIN SUR, YOU WILL
SURRENDER AND HAND YOURSELF OVER TO LEGION, OR YOU WILL BE DESTROYED!!!"

Abin thinking to himself - "Wherever I end up, hopefully I can find a worthy
successor. At worst, I'll fly into a star & destroy the ring and myself.
Either way, I cannot let this ring be taken. He pulls the hyper-space lever
& is thrust into hyper space. Sinestro is not pleased at all & decides to
take it out on his new pupil, smacking her hard with the back of his hand.

S - "YOU BLUNDERING IMBECILE!!!"

Arisia - "I am sorry master."

S - "No, you're not, but you will be. Your ring will take you back to our
masters for the proper punishment, I now have the daunting task of tracking
this fool.

A - "But master, just go after another, Abin is finished."

S - "I, young one, do not give up when my prey fights back... I will not
allow him to get away with humiliating me like this. and do not dare assume
to instruct me in my ways or I will do much worse to you than our masters
could."

Abin's ship emerges from Hyper-space, only after its power cells were
completely drained. Not enough power to even land the ship... not even sure
if he would be able to land it even if he had the power. Barely hanging onto
consciousness, Abin commands his ring to find a worthy successor as quickly
as possible. It will take a while for Sinestro to track him, at least the
one chosen will have a few cycles, with the rings' guidance, to prepare or
to get safely to OA. With his dying breath, Abin recharges his ring one
final time.

Abin - "In brightest day... in... blackest night. No evil shall...escape my
sight... let those that... worship evil's might... beware... my power, the
Green Lanterns li..."

The fighter is destroyed in an enormous ball of fire in a desert,
appropriately named, Death Valley.


-CHAPTER 12: The Source-

Hal Jordan, Green Lantern of sector 2814, fearless as he may be, is
currently scared out of his mind. Maybe not scared, more like 'freaked out'
as he would put it. He and his fellow Corpsman just entered the Anti-Matter
Universe of Qward via a "Dimensional rift", created by the Guardians of the
Universe. Still trying to wrap his head around all that has happened to him
over the past month is a bit overwhelming... He had always dreamed of being
among the stars, in a shuttle or a Mars lander... even with his power ring.
But having to rely on a suit of armor is even a bit more challenging. But,
the little blue men in the dresses made it & they've been doing this a lot
longer than he has, so he'll just have to suck it up & have a little faith.

He had imagined the Anti-Matter Universe to be somehow, different in
appearance than the "normal" universe. But it was not, everything looked
basically the same. The planet Qward, on the other hand, looked much
different than it's positive Universe counter-part. OA greatly resembles
Earth's moon, Qward looks just like a large rock with no discernable shape.
The space surrounding the planet is thick with asteroids and other spatial
debris. The Corpsman use their suits propulsion system to gravitate towards
a large chunk of rock... Hal sticking close to Kilowog & Tomar Re since
they're the closest thing to friends he has up there.

Hal - "So, that heap of rock is Qward?"

Tomar - "Yes, once it was a planet much like your Earth, but in the last
great battle between the Guardians & the Qwardians, their moon was
destroyed. This is the result of that cataclysm."

Kilowog - "You two shut yer holes. Ya wanna give away our position? Salakk,
take Ch'p & Katma , make your way down the left flank towards the planet.
When you're there spread out among the debris, try ta find the source & call
us. Don't engage until we're all ready. Tomar you and Chaselon are with me,
we're goin' down the right flank. Newbie, you stay here and keep an eye out
for Thunderer's, Destroyers or any of our own."

H - "What the hell are Thunderer's and Destroyers?"

Katma - "The bad guys genius, anyone not wearing green, got it?"

All the Lanterns depart leaving Hal alone on his rock pondering just how
much he hates Katma Tui when something catches his eye. A yellow burst of
energy and a flying "Thunderer" (or Destroyer since he still doesn't know
the difference)... followed by a missing Air Force Lieutenant. Guy Gardner
stood there laughing hysterically at what he had just done. Guy's military
fatigues were covered in yellow veins emanating from the ring on his right
hand, all converging into the "G" on his "Green Bay Packers" T-shirt, also
being covered by his bomber jacket.

H - "Suit, enhanced vision mode"

The suit complied & the view screen inside the helmet magnified. What Hal
saw disgusted him. Guy was standing there with a Qwardian in a crown
torturing a young girl in a Green Lantern uniform. She couldn't have been
more than 14 or 15 years old. She had no yellow on her, she was one of them,
not infected.

H - "Guys, the man that killed Sinestro is here. I know him... he's a real
dick & he's currently torturing one of our own with some bug-eyed guy in a
crown."

Kilowog - "Yeah, we see him... don't know who the girl is, but there's not
much we can do about it right now.

Salakk - "I have a visual on what could be the source. It looks like a
rougher, smaller version of our own central power battery. It's being
guarded by one Destroyer & two of our own."

Katma - "Kil, we also have a visual on the girl, she's there as well. If we
had a distraction of some sort, we could get in there, plant the charges,
get the girl & get out.

H - "Guys, they just cut off one of her fingers... and I think she's passed
out. Can we move this plan along a little?"

Kilowog - "Alright, Salakk, my team is has a visual on the area, we need a
distraction..."

Not waiting for orders any longer, Hal abandons his post. Thinking to
himself - "Well, if you need a distraction, I'm your guy." Unfortunately, no
one on the planet sees him since the propulsion system in the suit is very
slow.

Kilowog - "Get back to your sprockin' post newbie! This is our gig, you
haven't got enough experience in these suits..."

H - "Know what big guy, you're right! Screw this."

Hal energizes his ring and the armor disengages revealing a modified GL
flight suit. Immediately the infected Green Lanterns are aware of his
presence and set off after him with Guy in the lead.. Hal flies at top speed
towards the unconscious Arisia, grabs her, and heads out away from Qward and
the two teams of Green Lanterns. The Legion infected Lanterns along with a
few Destroyers immediately alter their course in pursuit.

Kilowog - "Sprock! Well, if we needed our diversion, that'll do. Salakk,
move in, use conventional weapons, no rings until the charge is planted.
Chaselon has the charge, Tomar & I will cover him directly. Move it Poozers,
we only get one shot at this..."

Hal douses Arisia in protective energy and set her down on an orbiting rock
when he is hit upside the head with a yellow fist. Guy & his army of
Legionnaires stand ready for a fight.

Guy - "Look at what the cat dragged in, if it isn't old 'Lucky Ace' himself.
How're the Corps treatin' ya, Jordan? Don't bother answerin', I really
couldn't give a damn."

Guy hits Hal hard & repeatedly with a pair yellow energy fists. Hal, after
regaining his composure, takes cover behind another chunk of rock.

G - "Come on Jordan, don't you want to come out & play??? Can you believe
it, I take this ring from that alien, I get all of these powers, and an army
that obeys every command I give them. Watch this..."

Pointing at one of the Legion infected Green Lanterns.

G - "You, kill yourself."

H - "Guy, don't..."

But it was too late, the Green Lantern Arkis of sector 3272 used a beam of
yellow energy to disintegrate himself leaving nothing but the yellow glowing
ring.

G - "Pretty cool huh, Jordan? Look who's better than who now... I command an
army and you're still just someone's lap dog."

H - "This isn't you Guy, you've been infected with a virus by that ring."

G - "Yeah, yeah, yeah. So what? I can now, officially, beat the crap outta
you without breakin' a sweat. Let me give ya a direct quote from one of my
least favorite people. 'Just proves one thing Hal, even if you don't think
I'm the best around here... with this ring... at least I can always prove
I'm better than you. Get over it."

With that Guy unleashes a salvo of yellow missiles towards the rock Hal sits
behind, destroying it utterly. Anticipating what Guys reaction would be to
his next move, Hal uses his ring to snare a large rock fragment and hurls it
towards Guy following it up with a pair of giant boxing gloves. All Guy sees
is the rock sailing at him & creates a giant saw blade to cut it in half. As
he does the boxing gloves nail him in the head from both sides. Guy falls
onto a meteor fragment, dazed, wiping blood from his lips & nose. His army
of Destroyers and infected Lanterns began to surround Hal prepared to
pounce.

G - "STAND DOWN NOW!!!"

Guy stands up staggers to one side & rights himself.

G - "He's mine"

Kilowog, Salakk & Tomar Re drain the energy cells of their suits using the
propulsion systems to maneuver one of the asteroids towards the surface of
Qward. Katma, Chaselon, Ch'p prepare themselves to make a run for the
source. In order to do this quickly & get out, they must abandon their suits
and use ring power. Luckily, most of their former comrades have been
distracted by the Hal vs. Guy slugfest, leaving only a few Thunderer's
guarding their prey.

Kilowog - "Alright Poozers, it's ShowTime. Starburst attack GO!"

All of them abandon their armor and take flight. Katma taking point,
Chaselon with the explosives in the center, Ch'p on the rear, Kilowog on
left flank, Salakk on right. Tomar Re stays back on the asteroid for
emergency evac. if necessary, he also holds the detonator. The 5 lanterns
barrel through the Thunderer's like they were bowling pins. They land
surrounding the source of Legion, protecting Chaselon so he can place the
explosive.

Guy suddenly is struck with a command - Go to the central battery, stop
them. Sweating, from the continued fight with Hal, Guy staggers back.

G - "NO, I will not... "

The rest of Guys army takes flight to the battery. Hal takes advantage of
the distraction and pounces on him. Due to his lack of training Guy is no
match for Hal & the ring of power.

Back at the Qwardian Central Battery disaster strikes. Chaselon's crystal
body is shattered by a bolt of yellow lightning and in his remains stands
Chief Weaponer Kiman.

Kiman - "You will not destroy all that I have worked for. I will have my
revenge... Legionnaires, Destroyers ATTACK!!!"

Kilowogs team is overrun with enemies. Immediately Katma & Ch'p are
infected with the virus. Salakk, defending himself & Kilowog from an
attacking Destroyer is caught off guard by an infected GL and has one of his
four arms violently ripped off. Tomar Re, still quite a distance away uses
his ring to get Salakk out before anything worse could happen to him,
leaving Kilowog alone.

Kilowog - "Jordan, I could use some help out here, you got anymore of them
jeeps lyin' around?"

H - "Hang on big guy, I'll be there as soon as I wipe the floor with Guy."

Guy, staggering, conjures an M60 & begins shooting at Hal, clipping him in
the arm before Hal is able to take cover.

H - "You're still a crap shot Gardner."

G - "Kill you... you sonova..."

Guy unleashes another Salvo of bullets in Hal's general direction. Hal takes
advantage of the situation and smashes Guy in the back of the head with a
glowing baseball bat. Gardner goes down. Hal flies over to him. Guy begins
to raise up...

H - "God, you're skull is thicker than I thought. Alright, let's make this
fair, I'll end this without my ring..."

G - "Bastard.."

Guy stands up & Hal starts beating him down with his fists until Guy can no
longer stand.

H - "Stay down... I'll be back for you later."

Hal flies over to the main firefight holding his injured arm, finding, to
his horror, an infected Kilowog is there waiting for him.

K - "Come on newbie, let's do this..."

H - "Ah, crap..."

Kilowog punches Hal in the stomach... hard knocking him to the ground on his
knees. Hal jumps up, quickly regaining his breath as Kilowog goes to pounce
on him. Hal hit's Kil upside the head with a large rock and makes a run for
it, taking to the sky. Hal flies over to Tomar Re, who's treating to
Salakk's wound.

Kiman - "After him, you ingrates, I will not have the Guardians pets best me
again."

A horde of Thunderer's & infected GL's start after him.

T - "Things are looking bleak out there, the weapon is armed, but it isn't
where it needs to be. if I activate the detonator now, at best, we'll dent
it."

H - "What needs to happen?"

T - "it must be detonated from within the battery."

H - "Alright then. There's a girl out there on one of the asteroids that
could use your help... nice knowing you Tomar."

Hal grabs the detonator and with all the speed he can muster, flies directly
for the explosive charge. Knocking everyone down in his path Hal reaches the
charge, grabs it and flies head first into the battery activating the
detonator as soon as he enters. In a brilliant green flash the battery
explodes, dousing everything in a bright green light. The planet Qward,
itself begins to break up, finishing the job the Guardians began so many
years ago. Katma Tui, Kilowog, Ch'p and all other GL's infected by the
Legion virus are immediately released of it's hold. Kiman was pinned between
a large fragment of the battery and a piece of the planet he once ruled.
Katma Tui approaches him...

Katma - "Alright Kiman, by code 263 of interplanetary law, you are under
arrest..."

Kiman - "As if I give a frag about your interplanetary law, you are all just
puppets being us... mrphphph."

Katma gags him and binds him in glowing emerald chains. The surviving
members of the GLC round up some of the fleeing Qwardians, but many escape
to unknown regions.

Kilowog, Tomar Re and Ch'p approach the ruin of the power battery sifting
through the rubble in hopes of finding Hal. And they do beneath one
particularly large piece of debris.

Kilowog - "Son of a pooz... he's still breathing. Tomar get him, Salakk &
the girl back to OA immediately. We'll follow up with the prisoners.

Hal awakens in a large room surrounded with beds full of injured Green
Lanterns. As he begins to rise a hand comes down on his chest to stop him.
Hal looks over to see a single Guardian standing beside him. The Guardian
begins to speak to him without telepathy...

Guardian - "Harold Jordan of 2814, you have shown exemplary courage, skill
and, if I may say, a bit of luck. My brothers and I were most impressed with
your abilities and, due to a sudden vacancy, would like to offer you a
permanent place among the Elite."

H - "Please, call me Hal. Thank you for your generous offer, but if it is
all the same, I would really like to get back home...

G - "Alright, 'Hal', you may return home as soon as you wish. But the offer
stands, and you may be called on occasion to assist with urgent matter not
pertaining to your sector. And you may call me Appa Ali Apsa. I am the
Guardian that governs your sector. I do expect great things from you... I
will be watching..."

Appa Ali Apsa turns and floats off as a familiar voice breaks the silence.

Kilowog - "Son of a Pooz, I knew you were too stubborn to die."

H - "Yeah, how're the others?"

K - Well, Salakk has seen better days, the Guardians have fitted him with a
prosthetic arm (of my own design, I might add). Ch'p & Katma's got a few
bumps & bruises, but she's stopped calling you names under her breath
anytime you're mentioned. The girl you rescued will be OK, her name is
Arisia, she's an alternate GL, I'm actually off to train her as a permanent
corpsman now."

H - "Well, at least some good things have come of this... Where's Guy?

Tomar Re approaches...

Tomar Re - "Gone. As far as we can tell, his ring did not turn back to
normal. The virus was completely obliterated, but Sinestro's ring was the
first to be infected and suffered irreparable damage. But I saw the two of
you battling, it will only be a matter of time before he wants a rematch,
I'm sure."

Earth, One week later, traveling up the Highway 1 up the coast of
California, civilian Hal Jordan enjoys the sunshine as he drives the rented
convertible back towards his hometown of Coast City. The following day is to
be his first at Ferris aircraft, and he couldn't be more ready to start his
new life. He has not heard from the Guardians or any of the other Corpsman
since returning, which was fine, he needed a break. He had discovered an
interesting change in the behavior of his power ring... his & his alone no
longer holds a weakness to the color yellow. Apparently, the rings makeup
had been altered in the blast back on Qward. Hal has no idea if the change
is permanent, but if not, so be it, he's proven himself already. Yes sir,
his life is looking pretty good right about now... who knows what the future
will bring!

End
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This is great Scott, I love your style of story telling - you include nice slices of humour in amongst some pretty stuff, and your prose is very clever. Kilowog is my favourite - is he an established character? Actually I think I kind of remember him - big, pink, knobbly face?

You've left enough loose ends that a follow up story is screaming to be written! so more, more, more is the order of the day laugh

I do have one small criticism though - your posts are huge! It might make it easier for the reader (and you too!) if you post smaller sections at a time. Just a suggestion.

I'll get onto your Moon Knight story soon, promise.

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Harbinger,

Thank you! Yes, you've got the character of Kilowog down, he's the one with the knobbly face. Good word, by the way!

If the only critisicm you have is that my posts are too long, then I'm a very happy guy. I actually thought about that... Do you think I should edit, and make them smaller?


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Very detailed, LanternLad! It's fun to see a whole gaggle of Green Lanterns in one story - and not through some time travel/Crisis-style get-together, but just as a natural reworking of the characters.

Looks like you've got a good set up for a sequel!


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Next chapters in the life of my Ultimate Hal Jordan. Very rough draft... never had an opportunity to finish it, I was too discouraged, As soon as I finished this, DC announced GL: Rebirth.

GREEN LANTERN - Legends of the Corps

Prologue
6 Months later, Dr. Neal Emerson stands amongst the wreckage of what once
was Star Labs Los Angeles. He had been experimenting with Magnetism for some
time and had finally developed gauntlets that would allow him to harness the
Earth's magnetic fields. The project dubbed Polaris had so far gone
untested, most of the other scientists did not like the idea of toying with
Earth's magnetic fields. Without the approval of his fellow scientists,
Emerson decided to test the gauntlets himself after hours... the resulting
in the destruction of Star Labs. The energy used tin the initial blast
permanently fuses the gauntlets to his arms. Emerson flees the scene as the
authorities arrive.

-CHAPTER 13: The Polaris Incident-

Coast City, California, the home of Carol Ferris, COO of Ferris aircraft.
Carol Ferris sits before her vanity preparing herself for her second date
with the new test pilot, Hal Jordan. To say the first date didn't go so well
would be an understatement... halfway through dinner, Hal abruptly left,
promising he would "be right back". Needless to say, after an hour, he
didn't, sticking her with the bill. The following Monday, Hal came to work
bearing a bouquet of flowers and apologizing profusely using a rather lame
excuse about his brother Jack. He begged for a second chance and, being a
sucker for his big brown eyes, gave in.

Little does Carol know, she's being watched...

Hal Jordan, test pilot & Green Lantern of sector 2814, drives his new black
convertible down the highway on his way to Carol Ferris' house. So far,
being GL of sector 2814, has been very interesting indeed. Living in Coast
City, he's become a bit of a local celebrity. Crime is way down and the
tourist trade is up, they've even begun selling t-shirts with his emblem on
it. He's been labeled the "Emerald Gladiator", "Emerald Crusader", "Emerald
Knight" and the "Green Guardian"... and even though he has turned down many
network interviews, he's reconsidering if it could get him a date with that
channel 11 news reporter. Yes indeed, life has become much more interesting
for him... but there is just something about this Carol Ferris.

As he pulls up to Carols house, his mind wanders to the last date... This
time, to ensure no interruptions, he left his power ring at home. Last time
he tried a date with Carol, some idiot calling himself "Evil Star" decided
to trash an observatory outside of town. Hal caught sight of the action as
it was unfolding on a TV in the restaurant he & Carol were at. Anytime
something happens that Hal can prevent or stop, his power ring has an
annoying habit of activating. When it activates, he feels a very odd
tingling sensation on his ring hand... and he has about 60 seconds to get
clear of anyone before his uniform appears. Not this time! They have
reservations at a restaurant with no television and no ring... but somehow,
he's pretty sure that wouldn't stop his ring, it's become almost as stubborn
as he is.

Hal approaches Carol's front door, bouquet of pink roses in hand & rings the
doorbell. After a moment, she opens the door.

Carol - "You're early flyboy, trying to get back on my good side?"

Hal - "I wasn't aware that I was still on your bad side... flowers?"

C - "Sure, I'll put them with the other bouquet you gave me this week."

Hal thinking to himself - "Ouch, had a feeling the flowers were a bad idea,
should have brought candy..."

C - "Don't look so worried, Hal, I'm just teasing you. They're beautiful,
you need to lighten up a bit."

H - "You're beautiful, the flowers are just to say 'hello'."

C - "Slow down there 'Ace', I never kiss on the first date."

H - "Second date ma'am, remember?"

C - "You call that fiasco a date? You need to raise you standards a bit. Oh,
and call me ma'am again and I'll make sure you fly nothing but flight
simulators for the rest of your natural life."

H - "Yes ma'... uh, right, ready to go then?"

In the car, on the way to the restaurant with the radio on...

H - "So, how long have you been in charge at Ferris?"

C - "Since my father retired 3 years ago..."

H - "Been tough?"

C - "At first... getting people to listen to me wasn't easy. We all warmed
up to each other eventually, and now we're a well oiled machine."

Radio announcer - "Breaking news out of Los Angeles, Star labs is the scene
of a major disas..." click.

Hal quickly turned the radio off, even though he has a nagging feeling that
he shouldn't have.

H - "Sorry, what were you saying?"

Later, at the restaurant, Hal & Carol sit across from each other sipping
wine.

H - "So, better than last time?"

C - "So far, so good... let's hope your brother doesn't have an emergency
this time."

H - "Heh, yeah... anyway, how about we get started with an appetizer, how
about..."

Hal is suddenly interrupted by a large explosion across the street,
shattering the windows in the restaurant. All of the patrons begin running
for cover. Instantaneously Hal's hand begins to tingle as his power ring
suddenly materializes...

H - "Ah crap... Carol, take cover in the kitchen..."

C - "What about you?"

H - "DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME, I'll get the injured folks to safety. JUST GO!

Carol runs to the kitchen in the rear of the restaurant with the other
patrons. Hal wills his GL uniform on

H - "Dammit, why the hell can't I just have a normal date like everyone
else?"

Hal flies out of the restaurant and sees overturned police patrol cars
littered across the street. The video store across the street was on fire
with people trapped inside. Between him & the video store stood an older man
in a lab coat with really big metal gloves. The man had just thrown Hal's
new car into the video store window, causing the explosion.

H - "Hey Pal, that car was not cheap..."

Hal thinking to himself - "OK, time to multi task." Sending a beam of light
into the fire, Hal scoops up the people in an emerald bubble. At the same
time, he wraps the deranged Dr. Emerson in glowing green chains.

H - "Alright, professor, what's your damage? Stop getting kick-backs from
your HMO?"

A street side mailbox comes loose from it's perch and hurtles itself at Hal.
Hal accidentally deflects it into a nearby parked patrol car. Apparently
chaining him isn't helping...

Dr. Emerson - "Leave me alone, it was an accident, I swear!"

H - "Sure, my car flying through a video store windows is what, an act of
God? Come on pal, come quietly, take off those stupid metal mittens, and
we'll work this mess out."

E - "NO, you idiot, you don't understand... they're a part of me now!"

Hal is struck upside the head with traffic light pole. Followed by a pair of
parked cars. Luckily, the folks Hal rescued were clear of the fire when his
concentration was broken. Also resulting in the release of Dr. Emerson.

Police bullhorn - "Dr. Neal Emerson, this is Chief Redding of the Coast City
PD, drop your weapons or we will be forced to open fire."

E - "I can't, you morons, they're attached."

Redding - "Alright, open fire"

Hal begins to emerge from the wreckage just as the CCPD begins firing on
Emerson. Emerson, using the Polaris gauntlets, stops the bullets in midair
and sends them back at the police that fired them. Hal manifests a
transparent green wall between the police & the bullets, stopping them just
in time.

H - "Hey chief, can we try to not piss off the guy with the big magnet
hands?"

E - "Why won't you listen to me???"

H - "Listen, Dr. Emerson is it? Come on guy, just power down & let's talk
about this."

E - "My life is over, Emerson is dead. Call me Polaris."

H - "I'll call you Susie, if that's what you want, just knock it off..."

Polaris begins to buckle the girders beneath the restaurant Hal & Carol were
dining at, bringing the façade of the restaurant down. Hal quickly places
Green support columns underneath the falling structure to hold it up. He
creates giant nets to catch the excess debris before it kills anyone or
destroys more property. Using Earth's magnetic fields, Polaris uses the
opportunity to make his escape, quickly flying out of sight. Hal decides to
save the restaurant patrons instead of pursuing Polaris. He rushes into the
ruined restaurant after he's sure the façade is secure. He finds Carol in
the restaurant kitchen helping to treat some of the wounded.

H - "Ladies and gentlemen, if you please come with me... quickly..."

He escorts everyone to relative safety, but Polaris is long gone. Carol
Ferris stares in awe at her rescuer. Chief Redding storms up to Hal, jabbing
a finger in his chest.

R - "You let the psycho go... hero. You could've let us go in after the
people and taken off after that nut job."

H - "Yeah, and possibly gotten you and your men killed. I made a judgement
call that I can live with chief, you don't like it, tough. And anyone ever
tell you it's not nice to point?"

Hal moves Chief Redding out of his way with a transparent green hand. Carol
runs up to him...

C - "Excuse me Mr. Lantern..."

H - "uh, yes, what can I do for you young lady...?"

C -"You were amazing, but... My, uh, friend was here helping the injured...
tall, brown hair, brown eyes, black suit?"

H - "Friend? ...Right... I think I saw him round the corner over there."

C - "Thank...

And with that, Hal takes off into the night sky (quickly rounding the corner
& changing out of his uniform).

C - "you ...wow..."

Carol gingerly walks in the general direction the Green Lantern pointed to,
keeping her eyes on the sky the entire time. That uniform, that body...

H - "Carol! Thank God you're alright, I was able to get those folks to
safety when all hell broke loose. Can I walk you home?"

C - "Walk, what happened to your car?"

H - "Crazy guy with the wacky gloves tossed it into that video store across
the way."

C - "No... you know what Hal... I think that maybe this isn't such a great
idea. I'll hop a cab & see you at work on Monday."

H - "Carol, come on, this wasn't my fault..."

C - "I know, it's just that... I don't think I should date employees, it
sets a bad example. And... and we're not getting off on a very good foot."

Carol turns & walks away, again, staring up into the night sky. Now that Hal
thinks about it - "she spent that whole brief conversation glancing up.
Great, I'm being dumped for myself... give me a freaking break."

Epilogue

Carol Ferris sits at her vanity brushing her long black hair thinking about
the mystery man known as Green Lantern. Even though she's never met him
before, she can't shake the feeling that she somehow knows him. Little does
she know, she is still being watched and has been all night long...

Female voice- "Amazing my sisters, this one will do nicely"

2nd female voice - "Agreed, and how ironic is it that her mate is one of the
Guardians puppets?"

3rd female voice - "yes, indeed, we will have fun with this one."

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Part 5 of my Ultimate GL...

-CHAPTER 14: Attack of the Star Sapphire-

Ferris Aircraft, the following Monday morning... Hal Jordan, test pilot
flies the experimental X-29 stealth fighter over the Pacific ocean.
Concentrating more on the past weekends events than his flying. "I can't
believe that I could have screwed up any worse... I lost the bad guy, my new
car and the damsel in distress."

Control tower - "Ace, wake up. You break that think and Tom is going to use
your hide as replacement parts."

Hal - "Roger that control... just got a lot on my mind."

Control - "Yeah, we heard... crash & burn with the boss lady... heard, it
was so bad she took a cab home. Ouch! She hasn't missed a day in 3 years,
and she isn't here, you really know how to show a girl a good time."

H - "Yeah, and lucky me, I get to listen to you jack-asses all day as
punishment. Uh-oh control, seem to be picking up some static control... I'm
losing you."

Hal reaches over and switches off the radio.

H - "Dick."

Palmdale, California, the residence of Brigadier General Alan Scott. For
months Alan Scott has followed the adventures of the Green Lantern. Since
discovering the GL symbol on the wreckage of the downed craft in Death
Valley Alan's memories and nightmares have returned. That night in
Vietnam... how could he have forgotten? Along the walls of his attic loft
are photos, articles and artist renderings of the Green Lantern. According
to all of the information gathered so far, the Lantern is based out of Coast
City, 40 miles north of Santa Barbara. According to Sunday's newspaper, last
Friday night was the last time the GL made his presence known... fighting a
Dr. Polaris. An amateur photographer was able to get a clear shot of the
GL's masked face. Seeing the Green Lanterns face confirmed a suspicion he
held since the first reports of a Green Lantern came in. Most of it adds up
now. Only two people were near the crash site, one disappeared, the other
relocated to Coast City under contract with Ferris Aircraft.

Alan walks over to the corner of the loft and pushes aside a pile of old
clothing, revealing an old trunk. He carefully opens the trunk revealing
stacks of old medals, maps & photos from Vietnam. Lifting up the floor of
the old trunk, he reveals a small iron, padlocked box. He removes the box
from the trunk and approaches the table in the center of the loft. He
reaches under the table and removes the padlock key attached to the table
bottom. He unlocks the box and opens it revealing an ancient glowing Green
Lantern ring. He Slips the ring on his left middle finger. Instead of a
complete change like with the other Green Lantern, the symbol appears on his
chest over his clothing and grey leather gauntlets appear on his forearms.

Alan - "Time to pay Lt. Hal Jordan a visit..."

Ferris aircraft, hanger 5, Hal & Mechanic Tom Kalmaku discuss the X-29 and
how it "handled".

Tom - "OK, Hal, now I know something's bugging you... you brought this bird
in without a scratch. I normally have to repair, just about everything. Date
with Carol really go that bad...?"

H - "Back off or I'll start calling you 'Pieface' like the other stick
jockeys in this place"

T - "Nah, you respect me too much to do that, and besides, I make sure your
planes don't burn out in mid-roll... one of these days those guys are going
to find their cockpit welded shut when they try to eject."

H- "Yeah right, you're all bark & no bite 'Pie'."

T - "Seriously man, keep it up, I'll hit you in the head with this
wrench..."

Hal heads back to the locker room. As he begins to change out of his flight
suit, the hanger begins to shake as if by a moderate Earthquake. Hal's right
hand begins to tingle as his GL ring begins to activate.

H - "Come on, it's gotta be an Earthquake"

As his GL uniform begins to appear, Tom Kalmaku rounds the corner &
witnesses the transformation...

T - "Hal, are you alright, that was... Oh my God, You're the Green
Lantern???"

H - "Quiet... Tom. If you don't mind, could you keep this between you & me?"

T - "Ah, hell no..."

H - "Tom, I..."

Unseen female voice - "I HAVE COME HERE TO CLAIM MY PRIZE, WHERE IS THE
GUARDIANS LAP-DOG!!!"

H - "Tom, stay put, don't say a word."

Willing the ring to make himself invisible, Hal flies straight up through
the hanger and into the afternoon sky. As soon as he reaches a spot that
makes it look as though he didn't come from the hanger, he materializes.
There before him floats a beautiful woman with jet black hair, wearing a
purple & white costume, crowned with a sapphire encrusted tiara.

H - "Hello gorgeous, if you really wanted my attention, all you had to do
was call me... no earthquakes required."

S - "I am the Star Sapphire, queen of the Zamarons & eternal opponents of
your master, the Guardians of the Universe. I have chosen you as my mate...
you will come with me now, or be destroyed."

H - "Wow, a little forceful, aren't you? Well, as appealing as that sounds,
I'm going to have to pass... I have this rule, no sleeping with super
villains on the first date. Besides, I don't go for royalty types."

S - "You dare turn me down, then mock me. I will tear your head from your
shoulders & use the splinters of your spine as toothpicks."

H - "Right... you're a bit crazy, aren't you?"

A beam of energy shoots out of Sapphires tiara and strikes Hal dead center
in the chest knocking him to the ground. She then pours on the pressure,
pinning Hal to the ground.

H - "Good God, she could actually back her words up..."

Hal manifests a shield of green energy to block her bombardment, giving
himself enough time to get airborne.

H - "Lady, I refuse to hit women, but you're really starting to piss me
off..."

S - "SILENCE WORM!!!"

She shoots more energy beams from her tiara and her hands. Hal, blocks all
of the blasts and retaliates, by encasing her in an energy bubble.

S - "I WILL NOT BE CAGED!"

Once again, she pours on the energy, but cannot break through his barrier. A
crowd begins to gather below as the Ferris aircraft ground crew emerges from
hiding.

Hal thinking to himself - "Need to take her down, not sure how much longer I
can hold this barrier... Got it!"

Hal begins to rapidly drain the energy bubble of oxygen, rendering Star
Sapphire unconscious. Mustering up what he would call the "big boy voice"...

H - "No need to worry... uh, citizens... I'll deliver this young lady to the
authorities."

Hal flies off rapidly thinking to himself - "God, I sounded like an idiot."

Willing himself & the Star Sapphire invisible he re-enters hanger 5. Tom
Kalmaku rushes back in to meet him.

T - "Hal, that was amazing"

H - "Yeah, I'll deal with you in a second, lets disarm this psycho before
she wakes up."

Hal enters the green bubble and removes the jeweled tiara and gloves. Once
this task is complete he dissolves the bubble. And removes her mask,
revealing Carol Ferris.

H - "What the hell...?"

T - "Man, I didn't think your date went that bad."

H - "Tom, shut up."

Suddenly the air surrounding the two men begins to crackle with electricity
as a portal opens from nowhere. Three very tall beautiful women emerge from
the portal.

Z1 - "We are the Zamarons."

Z2 - "You have defeated our chosen queen Green Lantern of sector 2814... not
an easy task to complete."

Z3 - "We have come to collect what is rightfully ours."

Hal stands upright with his ring held ready.

H - "You won't touch her."

Hal is suddenly held up against the wall by a dark purple energy issued from
the lead Zamaron, the more he struggles, the tighter the grip around him.

Z1 - "We are not here for the female, you insignificant worm."

Z2 - "She is of no use to us anymore, we are here for the crown."

Carols limp body lifts into the air & with a blinding flash of light, she is
returned into a nightgown. Hal is released from the wall and hits the ground
hard.

H - "Why, did you do this...?"

Z3 - "Because it pleases us to do so. The Guardians choose pawns, as do we."

H - "This is just a game to you??? You screw with peoples lives like this
for a few chuckles?"

Z1 - "Yes, we will meet again, Green Lantern."

The Zamarons disappear into the portal.

T - "Wow, now what?"

Hal points his ring at Tom's head and unleashes a short burst of energy...
and lower Tom's unconscious body to the floor.

H - "Sorry pal, when you wake up, you'll have no memory of this."

Making himself and Carol invisible, Hal drops Carol off at her home and
flies back to his apartment. He enters his apartment to find a stranger
standing in his living room.

H - "Look pal, you chose the wrong day to screw with me."

Alan Scott steps out from behind the shadows, burning GL symbol on his
chest.

A - "I'm not here to fight you Lt. Jordan... I'm here for answers."
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And... Part 6 the last bit I wrote. More will come soon, at least in plot form like this. I haven't jumped back into writing full scripts yet (work got kinda hectic lately). It's insanely rough draft form & I have no idea where it will fit in the final story arc, but I needed to write it before it was out of my head permanently. IT IS THE HISTORY OF THE GUARDIANS, as seen through my eyes.

GREEN LANTERN - Legends of the Corps
-PAST MISTAKES-

-CHAPTER ???: Legend of the Green Flame-

For over 3 billion years the Guardians of the Universe have kept peace in
the
galaxy with their Green Lantern Corps. 3600 beings from across the Universe,
each fearless, possessing unshakeable willpower and a ring of power capable
of doing anything the bearer desires. This was not their first attempt at a
galactic peacekeeping force.

From the book of OA:

The Manhunter Project was a complete disaster, but unfortunately, their next
mistake was much, much worse. The Guardians began thinking of a way to
create a peacekeeping force of sentient beings. Noble, fearless, with
willpower that could be used to channel & manipulate the Guardians vast
psionic power. The Guardians created a prototype weapon, a ring of unlimited
power, that could not be destroyed, that, in a burst of green flame, create
anything the bearer could imagine.

The Guardians chose a test subject, a humanoid adventurer named Tuoron from
what would become sector 1. He was chosen due to his fearlessness &
incredible willpower. Tuoron was given this ring of power and the Guardians
gave it unlimited energy. The Guardians learned quickly that they had made a
huge error in judgement. Power can corrupt, but absolute power can corrupt
absolutely. Tuoron began using his ring, not to bring criminals to justice
or to maintain peace in his sector, but to become judge, jury, executioner &
God to many worlds in his sector of space. When the Guardians realized what
he was doing, they sent one of their own to stop him. Unfortunately, that
Guardian was executed & returned to OA personally by Tuoron himself.

Tuoron declared war on the Guardians and in a burst of Green flame, OA was
set ablaze. Buildings were leveled, forests were turned into ash and almost
every living creature on the planet was destroyed. Not since the days of
Krona had the Guardians endured such chaos. Many of the Guardians were
murdered by this power hungry madman until two Guardians devised a way to
stop him. When the flames were finally subdued Ganthet & Appa Ali Apsa,
members of the High Council, knew that the ring could not be destroyed, but
the ring & the power residing in it could still be manipulated in many ways.
The surviving 40 Guardians banded together in secret and created a power
battery in the shape of an enormous lantern designed to siphon energy from
the ring. Although they could not siphon all of the energy from the ring,
they could at least drain enough power to weaken him & strike.

Tuoron, declaring OA the kingdom from which he would conquer the universe,
went blissfully unaware of the Guardians plan. Four of the Guardians
volunteered for what would happen next. The four entered the new power
battery and began to unleash all of their energies, until their life force
was completely drained and contained within the battery. Their sacrifice
attracted Tuor to the battery where the 36 remaining Guardians unleashed a
maelstrom of power at the unsuspecting villain. Snared in the iron grip of
the Guardians before the Power Battery, a brilliant beam of light emanates
from the battery. Striking Tuoron in the chest, the battery begins to drain
his ring of power weakening him and allow the Guardians the opportunity to
strike. The Battery drained Tuoron of his life force, trapping his life
force forever within and crumbling his body to ash. On the ash lies the
ring, as it gradually recharges itself to full power.

The Guardians, still believing the idea of the Green Lantern Corps will
work, decide to this time, go about the process differently. They create a
new ring, one less powerful than its predecessor and forever tied to the
Central power battery as a testament to those that came before. The new
rings would be vulnerable and powerless to anything colored yellow, and the
rings would require a power charge every 24 Earth hours. Taking another
precaution, the Guardians rebuild their mighty city, this time coloring
everything yellow.
The original ring could not be destroyed, but could still be manipulated.
The Guardians decided to make the ring vulnerable to one substance that
could be found on most of the inhabited worlds in the universe... wood. The
Guardians placed the ring within a piece of rock and sent it into the heart
of a distant star where it is presumed to remain to this day.

Vietnam, January 30th, 1968, 12:35am.

They had not seen this coming. A cease-fire was called for a 36-hour period
beginning at midnight by both sides to observe Tet, a Vietnamese holiday
celebrating the turning of the lunar year. A barrage of rockets and mortars
rained down on them from above. Alan Scott has just witnessed half of his
unit killed in the initial ambush.


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