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Re: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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Originally posted by walkwithcrowds: I've just read the latest one vision by Crujectra.
Really enjoyed it. Cru you must have some very stange dreams - the Time Mouse Trapper?!.
I am looking forward to new episodes and will go back to read the previous one till then.
Keep up the good work.
10 out of 10 Oops! Sorry! I haven't checked this thread in ages! I can't take credit for the Time Mouse Trapper. That's an old LMBP villain from way back in our early days. Same with the Entropy Spinach. I think I might have given each my own little twist, though All of the other villains were mine (I think).
Some people are like slinkys: not really good for anything, but they bring a smile to your face when you knock them down a flight of stairs
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Re: Joe-boy Harvestar's Legion Academy...
Wonderful work, and I'd certainly like to see the backstory on how all these people got together?
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It's good to see that Numf is writing the second part of his story about me.
It's even better to see that I'm not a snot-faced junkie slut this time. (I've still to get you back for that one Numf!)
SSx
Some days I just don't feel like slaying dragons. It looks like you're shit out of luck today, Puff.
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Just want to let everyone know that I'm really enjoying this latest tag team thread so far! Lots of cool little bits and various things going on. Keep at it! I'm loving how everyone has started to make certain storylines 'their own', but still very open to sharing the storylines and connecting them all. The Gen-Cars are the real show-stealers so far! But I had to add in one of my favorite LMBers to write, Dedman, for at least a few parts
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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I must say, having this set "52 days later" made it very easy to set up all the Lard Lad developments I had planned!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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I've gotta say, I'm having a lot of fun reading everyone's posts in the new tag team thread! Lots of cool stuff going on!
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Trap Timer
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Incidentally, I have no idea who the other two members of the Matchmakers are, so anyone can feel free to contribute their ideas!
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Alright, in my latest post I've set up a big bad for the story, possibly THE Big Bad. Maybe, it's too early, but I felt I had to do something like this to set up a mystery about Hummer Lass's ally. And, yes, I have a good idea who this guy should be!
However, there's still plenty of room to call audibles. Proceed with your story ideas as planned and see whether one bad guy behind the scenes makes sense!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Sounds good! We'll see how it goes and how the stories develop. No need to make any plans for the finale of the story yet, since we're on page 2 (of 52 ), but I'm curious to see where things go! I've gotten some pretty cool ideas perculating myself that I'm toying around with, and from the way everyone's posting, it seems like so does everyone else! Everyone keep your ideas flowing free!
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BTW, I like how we're focusing on Gen-Cars and Alts with some real LMBers thrown in there throughout. I do plan to eventually do a post or two about Cobalt Kid, Shark Lad, Disaster Boy and Hrun in Dark Oval space if no one minds leaving that for me (unless of course, one of those posters would like to do something with themselves ).
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Well I'll do an establishing post for Seth. Not sure where to put him, since I was trying to get some things settled OOCly about background info. Tag him, if there's some storyline he's needed for?
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Just to clarify--the urnlike canister referred to in the post regarding Hummer Lass's co-conspirator is unrelated to the one Jailbait Lass is carrying around! ( I think!)
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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you guys are doing an awesome job! I'd jump in, but I'm feeling slightly overwhelmed by the sheer breadth of it all ...
Just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water...
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Sharky, there are several separate stories going on that we'll eventually find some way to connect. Just throw another one out there and run with it!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Fabulous and Sparkly!
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Fabulous and Sparkly!
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It's kind of hard to tell in this font, but Rockhopper Lad's dog (and mine) spells his name H-Y-V-V-I-E. It's Hyvvie with two Vs, not "Hywie" with a W. Just in case anyone mentions him now that he's called in the other Super-Pets.
The only character in all of literature who has been described as "badnass" while using the phrase "vile miscreant."
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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I wonder what Rockhopper Lass will remember if her memory's ever restored. Any ideas on that, Rocky?
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Fabulous and Sparkly!
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Fabulous and Sparkly!
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Everything!
The only character in all of literature who has been described as "badnass" while using the phrase "vile miscreant."
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Tease! In my "bad guy" post, I hinted she learned something very important without having any idea what that may be, so you better deliver, daggummit!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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I am LOVING the tag thread so far. All the stories are running great and the one-off posts by people are making it awesome too.
I've begun to develop my long term plan for Jailbait Lass/Danger Damsel/Barbarian Horde/other things yet to come into play, but its too early to say yet. I want to let some stuff play out. Quis, I like where you're story is going and may have a good way to connect our stories down the road--I'll PM you when we get farther along.
And 'Hrun' and I have a good hold on the Dark Oval/UP war front...
As always, everyone feel free to use this thread to comment/question/plan!
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Hey, guys...just letting you knowthat I'm not trying to dominate the thread right now, but the current sequence of events I'm working on demands some pretty rapid development! Please, feel free to contribute your own stuff in the middle of my craziness!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Tamper, I hope my post with your character and Wyandotte was consistent with how Tamper lad would handle this situation. From what I'd read in the past and on the thread itself, how I wrote him seemed to jibe with his character. I hope it wasn't far off!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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No problem Lardy, the only thing thats consistent about TL is that he's too full of himself in whatever his thought of the day is.
Sometimes its taking over the universe other times its making money. But mostly its fawning over pretty girls and making an donkey of himself.
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Time Trapper
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I kinda thought so, but I'm a little apprehensive everytime I write a character when he's doing more than just saying a line or something. Isn't it a little weird that your character knows something about a mysterious bad guy, but you don't?
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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BTW, Tamper, your references to Cobalt Kid throughout this tag thread have been spot-on, and have been hysterical
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strange but not a stranger
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strange but not a stranger
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I'll add more after Seth put in something. He is going to have Seth & Helena Handbasket meeting up.
Big Dog! Big Dog! Bow Wow Wow!
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