This is something that I have worked on for a while and I thought I might as well start posting some of the stuff I have written. You'll notice that I am a freak in details.
I want your opinions, and I'll take them into deep consideration.
If I ever get around to posting pics, hopefully they'll be ones drawn by my friend, she can draw, I can't I take models of bodies and post hair and clothes on them.
This doesn't have to do with the Legion, but I would still enjoy your comments and advice.
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Posted by HighPriestessViviane on :
I have decided to post two characters bios at a time. I haven't written any stories yet, but I do have an enitre year's worth in my head, so if you get interested (hopefully you will) than you can ask me about it and I can give you the quickie version.
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Posted by MLLASH on :
So far, so good, Viv. I really like the name "Sable Sorceress", it conjures up some cool images in my mind.
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I've "drawn" almost all the characters, trying to get someone with talent to help me with that but no avail.
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Posted by Cobalt Kid on :
Very good so far Terry! It seems like you've put a lot of thought into these characters and you have a lot planned. I think with a little more polish and fleshing them out (often by writing scenes were they interact so they develop a personality 'on their own' in a way).
I like Sable Sorceress too and her connection to Salem.
Posted by HighPriestessViviane on :
Thanks, I'm just about done introducing characters, and then I'll start writing and then I'll give bios like this when I bring them into a story line.
A lot of people have taken a liking to Sable Sorceressm there disappointed when they see how simple she's drawn, but that makes it better cause it allows her attitude to shine, I never give too much detail in costumes, I like simple and chic for some reason.
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Posted by Invisible Brainiac on :
Cool! I love the way you've developed the characters.
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Thanks, IB, your feedbsck is much appreciated.
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I haven't abandon this, I've just been very busy. This next one is about my favorite character I have created so far, I took a lot of time writing this so feed back would be very much appreciated.
PS. If your looking for some masculine characters, they're right around the bin, one female and then three males.
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Posted by Invisible Brainiac on :
I think Windsong will be my new fave character. I really loved her origin. Will we ever see Audrey and GENE again?
Posted by HighPriestess Viviane on :
I'm thinking Audrey could come back, and maybe Nurse Lori, but the irony is that she destroyed the place and killed everyone except the captives because their cells protected them, it also allows me to experiment with psychotic mutants running about.
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Okay, I'm bumping this so I remember to post, which I should do later today.
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Posted by High Priestess Viviane on :
I loved sharing my work with you, but I need this thread deleted.
Posted by Nightcrawler on :
Instead of deleting it, how about thinking of cool ways to make it work. Be creative, not destructive!
Posted by High Priestess Viviane on :
quote:Originally posted by Nightcrawler: Instead of deleting it, how about thinking of cool ways to make it work. Be creative, not destructive!
I'm trying to, I want it published so I have to get this stuff off the internet, I talked a long time with some professional on why I should take it off the internet being that I have no legal claims to these characters.
Posted by Nightcrawler on :
Well editing them away was good enough.
Let me know if you need someone else's post edited.
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