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This is something that I have worked on for a while and I thought I might as well start posting some of the stuff I have written. You'll notice that I am a freak in details.
I want your opinions, and I'll take them into deep consideration.
If I ever get around to posting pics, hopefully they'll be ones drawn by my friend, she can draw, I can't I take models of bodies and post hair and clothes on them.
This doesn't have to do with the Legion, but I would still enjoy your comments and advice.
[ July 04, 2005, 04:38 PM: Message edited by: High Priestess Viviane ]
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I have decided to post two characters bios at a time. I haven't written any stories yet, but I do have an enitre year's worth in my head, so if you get interested (hopefully you will) than you can ask me about it and I can give you the quickie version.
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Very good so far Terry! It seems like you've put a lot of thought into these characters and you have a lot planned. I think with a little more polish and fleshing them out (often by writing scenes were they interact so they develop a personality 'on their own' in a way).
I like Sable Sorceress too and her connection to Salem.
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Thanks, I'm just about done introducing characters, and then I'll start writing and then I'll give bios like this when I bring them into a story line.
A lot of people have taken a liking to Sable Sorceressm there disappointed when they see how simple she's drawn, but that makes it better cause it allows her attitude to shine, I never give too much detail in costumes, I like simple and chic for some reason.
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