I draw yesterday my take on the first 2 pages of the preview by Mr Waid & Mr Kitson.
I kept the number of panels, but changed the camera angle, and designed my own aliens/characters. Let me know what you like/dislike, what works and what doesn't work, etc...
I plan to work on the next pages not until next week.
Note that some details are missing because of the quality of the scans.
From: Berlin | Registered: Nov 2003
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Great redo...love the first page. Great expression on the kids! Great angles too.
Great job on the second page but one minor thing. We know from the preview that the alien was on a talk show, in your first panel on the second page it looks more like just two people speaking. And the jump from that to the planetscape is a bit jarring. However the emotion on the face of the kids are dead on.
Why haven't you tried out for CBR'S Comic Book Idol! You would be perfect! And you already have a great estbalished fan base here!
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Not bad, Frog! I like what I see...you've got great looking characters and nice lay-outs.
I can't wait to see what you've got for the remaining preview pages, especially Lyle's scene and the legendary splash page.
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Cool... a Space Ghost AR appearance. I love Space Ghost. He should be in the Legion.
Seriously, great work FK. I wish I had the capacity for drawing and coloring the way other posters do. Alas I do not, so I just stand back and be impressed.
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From: NOVA by way of NOIN | Registered: Jul 2003
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About my own take on the Legion preview, I must say I'm desesperate: looking at the pages I posted, I can't find one thing I like in it. It is too rushed. I can spot many errors. I think I will re-do them.
From: Berlin | Registered: Nov 2003
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