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Author Topic: MATTER-EATER LAD: The Series!!! Eryk Davis Ester Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe! posted                       So, do I get the write the next page, or do you have someone in mind that you want entering that hot tub? From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  MLLASH bite into the all-caps posted                       Actually I do have a certain femizon ex-wife in mind, but I think now's a good time to segue into the next Tenz/Taryn/Lester scenario! (translation: go Eryk go!) [ February 05, 2004, 09:07 PM: Message edited by: MLLASH ] -------------------- Visit the FULL FRONTAL FANDANGO & laugh along with Lash at http://lashlaugh.wordpress.com/ Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Eryk Davis Ester Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe! posted                       PAGE 14 Panel 1 Tenzil: So, I still think challenging Evillo to a debate and getting him to confess is our best option! Taryn: What about my plan? Panel 2 Tenzil: I just don't think we can pass Lester off as being an agent of the Bismollian Scientific Advisory Council who's checking up on your father's "experiments". First off, he's not Bismollian. Panel 3 Taryn: That didn't stop him from being employed as a governmental courier. Panel 4 Tenzil: Well, let's just suppose he get into Evillo's castle. What does he do then? Taryn: Snoop around, of course! Tenzil: And you think Evillo's going to let a Bismollian government agent snoop around his castle? Panel 5 Lester has been reading a news paper the whole time. The panel reveals that he's looking at an ad advertising tryouts for the Devil's Dozen. Lester: Hmm... I think I've got an idea... From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Invisible Brainiac Unseen, not unheard. posted                       Oh, I LOVE where this is going! More soon, I hope! -------------------- Loss: How does the galaxy cope w/o the Postboot Legion? Titans Idol - vote for your favorite Titans members! From: Wouldn't you like to know? | Registered: Oct 2003  |  IP: Logged |  MLLASH bite into the all-caps posted                       Eryk, if you don't mind, take another page so I can get a better feel of this scene... (my initial ideas included Tenzil-- in disguise at the tryout-- smashing Evillo in the face with a pie. Not sure if you wanna go that route) -------------------- Visit the FULL FRONTAL FANDANGO & laugh along with Lash at http://lashlaugh.wordpress.com/ Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Eryk Davis Ester Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe! posted                       I'll post some more this weekend. I know what I want to do with it, but I'm just not really sure how things are going... From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Cobalt Kid BOHICA posted                       Dear writing staff, As your biggest fan, I hope you don't mind if I ask you a fanboy question. But, can we have a steamy sex scene ? Cobalt from Connecticut From: If you don't want my peaches, honey... | Registered: Sep 2003  |  IP: Logged |  MLLASH bite into the all-caps posted                       Doesn't Evillo staring sensually at Taryn's visage in the monitor count...? -------------------- Visit the FULL FRONTAL FANDANGO & laugh along with Lash at http://lashlaugh.wordpress.com/ Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Eryk Davis Ester Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe! posted                       How about the Zombie lap dance? That's pushing the envelope far enough for one issue, methinks! From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  MLLASH bite into the all-caps posted                       *tee hee!* -------------------- Visit the FULL FRONTAL FANDANGO & laugh along with Lash at http://lashlaugh.wordpress.com/ Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Cobalt Kid BOHICA posted                       That was pretty hysterical ! I was laughing out loud at that! From: If you don't want my peaches, honey... | Registered: Sep 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Eryk Davis Ester Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe! posted                       Okay, so if we're going to show a Ma-Thora meeting, I think we have to do that before the actual tryout scenes, since those are supposed to take place the next day. So if you want to write that next, go ahead Lash. I'm thinking a 2-3 page hot tub scene, then the remaining 5-6 pages will be Tenzil and Taryn trying to infiltrate the tryouts, and will end with the big cliffhanger where they've been found out... From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Eryk Davis Ester Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe! posted                       Next Issue Title: "Tartar Us!" From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  MLLASH bite into the all-caps posted                       Will Thora meeting Ma mess up any plans? 'Cause I really wasn't sure where Thora's appearance was leading... go on ahead with the tryout scene, and I'll think of someone else to be joining Ma in that tub... actually, I already HAVE and I'm HELLA-EXCITED....! It's so kewl we gotta save it for the end of the book...! -------------------- Visit the FULL FRONTAL FANDANGO & laugh along with Lash at http://lashlaugh.wordpress.com/ Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |  Eryk Davis Ester Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe! posted                       PAGE 15 Panel One (Applicants gathered at Evillo's palace awaiting tryout, once again, with the two Zombie's from last issue overlooking them from the same balcony again) Zombie #1: Well, Wheez, what do you think of today's applicants? Do you think any will be lost to the Realm of Darkness? Zombie #2: I do believe, my dear Hakk, that our loss would be the Realm of Darkness's loss as well! Panel Two (Evillo is interviewing an extremely attractive female applicant) Evillo: So, first up, I see, we have here Two-Face Tess? Well, it's got a nice villainous ring to it if nothing else... What do you do? Panel Three Two-Face Tess: Allow me to demonstrate... Panel Four (Two-Face Tess pulls off her face, revealing a more hideous visage underneath!) Two-Face Tess (the voice coming from the face that has been "pulled off": Witness my unique ability to remove my beautiful outer appearance, revealing my inner monster! Panel Five Evillo: Ha! I think you'll fit right in with my Elite Royal Guard! From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003  |  IP: Logged |

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