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Well let's see ------- The Phantom Zone:A limbo between limbos and nothingness yet the greatest criminals of Krypton live there.Lar Gand of Daxam waits not long ago(years in the future,Long ago?)he was Valor a teenaged hero among heroes.Or is he? Yes or no it doesn't even matter any more.Superman he sees die,he sees all heroes die and sees the Time-Trapper is really Rokk Krinn A.K.A Cosmic Boy.He(Valor)just watches the end of time and everything begins again and again and again.A portal opens and a phantom girl comes in and pulls Valor out he feels sick and is blasted by a needle."Owww,hey the pain,the sickness has disappeared I'm now invunerable even to lead."A green boy smirks "Welcome to the 30th Century Valor."Valor gives an evil glare at Cosmic Boy."Brainiac 5.1 call me M'Onel the martian word for wanderer." ------- This is a small version of Valor/Mon-El/M'Onel's reawakening to the world in the 30th Century.Enjoy
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quote:Originally posted by Invisible Brainiac: Interesting take on it, VtM.
I agree, that's an interesting twist to a familiar story.
-------------------- "Hey Jim! Get Mon out of the Zone!! And...when do we get Condo back?"
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Just so you know this is set like it's in Smallville the TV series it introduces Ultra Boy ---- Smallville:A lazy farm town with an extra-terrestial among them an old fat man and a young brown haired muscled teenaged boy appear from thin air the old man turns to the boy "Now are you sure we are wearing the right clothes for this century?"the teenager just smirks and nods his head. Smallville High:Clark Kent and Pete Ross talk about Kara the supposed 'Krypton Girl' and both stare at Lana Lang.Clark avoids her and bumps into the new boy "Oh so sorry Clark Kent.Hello Pete Ross." with an italian,irish,scottish and an unknown hint of another language and heritage."Wow Pete that guy sounded so odd."Pete looks at Clark and notices he actually felt them hitting each other. Class:the teacher looks at the new boy.It's obvious Lana has a crush on him."Everybody this is Gary Crane he comes from Metropolis and insists on Mr.Kent to show him around."Clark gulps and sighs to Pete "This is not good." The Talon:Clark,Chloe and Pete discuss the meteor shower and it's affects on people.Clark looks over at Gary and Lana.Lana seems to be saying "Why do you want to know everything about Clark?".Pete waves his hand in front of Clark's face "Man what have I told you about using your super-hearing to eavesdrop?"Clark notices Chloe has gone and continues to listen in to Gary and Lana.TO BE CONTINUED.............
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Yes or no it doesn't even matter any more.Superman he sees die,he sees all heroes die and sees the Time-Trapper is really Rokk Krinn A.K.A Cosmic Boy.He(Valor)just watches the end of time and everything begins again and again and again.A portal opens and a phantom girl comes in and pulls Valor out he feels sick and is blasted by a needle."Owww,hey the pain,the sickness has disappeared I'm now invunerable even to lead."A green boy smirks "Welcome to the 30th Century Valor."Valor gives an evil glare at Cosmic Boy."Brainiac 5.1 call me M'Onel the martian word for wanderer."![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
